SWEET! I love this! *faves* Good job!

Gwee! Yea! Pretty! Like! (!) Couple! Nice! Like! Happy! Gwe!

(yeah, it took me long enough to find this... but oh, well. i'll read some of your others at some point too.)

Miss you at school, btw.

This is good to be your first fic, actualy this was great. If only I could writ feelings like that. Well, I may not see so much in other couples than the canon couples but this was something...unusal good!

Keep that spirit in your next storys and you will be a great writer!O

That was a wonderful fic,

For one to be honest in the beginning besides the great choice of words and wonderful detail, I was afraid it would be a Zel/Amelia or Zel/Lina (which I also enjoy btw) but then it began to become Z/X which I simply adore now _ So anyway I love the fic, and I hope that whatever happened to you while you were writing this, doesn't ruin your life. Also if anything bad like that happens again (if you've gotten over this onee) just remember about your frind sand stuff and...urm...yeah _ Whee! Love the writing and the idea, and I hope you write alot more fics and even poems like this.

- ja

I have just three words for you:

Yum!

("That's only one word!" they cry. Well, you know what I think of THEM.)

Anyway, this is told really well. Very entertaining. And bishonen slash is good. Very good.

Hey, that was pretty good. Personally, I found it kind of funny, but that's just me. I find humor in slash, usually. It was well written and well composed. Not bad!

awwww, kawaii! I love this fic!

It's sweet and... has my favourite couple Xel/Zel.

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