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Luna Nightraven 1/25/04 . chapter 6
Wow! I regret not finding this sooner. This is probably the best Digimon fic I've ever read. It was very well-written, and everybody was kept in character really well.
I just wanted to cry when Angel sacrificed herself for Kari and Angewomon. And I had always wondered what could have happened if Kari had gone to the Digital World with the others at the beginning, since Gatomon was working for Myotismon and would not have been there to protect Kari. And I felt so bad for Tai's double; he really must have been devastated to lose Kari that way.
Anyway, I loved the fic. You really have some talent, and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you've written. And what else you'll write in the future. Keep writing!
Aardwulf 1/24/01 . chapter 6
How'd I manage to overlook this?...I feel stupid now. As usual. -.-;;; Overall, a satisfying read, although the conclusion did seem a bit rushed after all the set-up of the previous chapters. Very well-written, however, and heck, it's an Elseworlds, which always scores major points with ol' Aardy. ** It'd be interesting to see a series dealing with the kids' replacements from the alternate world - how they all, especially Tai, deal with their doubles' everyday lives. You're a very talented author, and I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
Lavenderangel 1/21/01 . chapter 4
Just so ya know I'm Takari-chan the moron who's reviewed...most ofthe parts. Awwww! poor Angel! I hope none of the Digidestand die! cya!
N-chan 1/7/01 . chapter 6
i luved it!

although, i wish the ending had been better. they could have gotten the chance to say good bye to their digimon... but i liked how TK was the one who led them to victory. that was cool. and Kari was the first one by his side. TK and Kari forever! Yay!

great fic!
Thinker 1/4/01 . chapter 6
While technically sound and skillfully crafted, this chapter feels a tad rushed, almost as if you were more focused on finishing than on creating a strong ending. The final battle seemed lacking and abrupt. And what about the remaining Dark Masters or the other Digidestined of that world? Don't get me wrong, I *really* liked this series, and I'm only making these comments because I feel certain that you could do better.
sailormoonshadow 1/3/01 . chapter 6
Wonderful story I loved it. I can't remeber if I reviewed the other part, so sorry if I didn't. Please write wore, perhaps a sequal (soon please).
Takari-chan 1/3/01 . chapter 3
I don't be'leave it! I thought you stop writing this after parts one and two! Evle Piedmon! What's wrong with Izzy? Don't make it to bad kay? Well that made know sense, I don't know if anything's really wrong but I hope not! as always this was really good! bye takari-chan
N-chan 12/19/00 . chapter 5
that was really good. i keep coming back to read more! please come out with chapter six soon, ok?
N-chan 12/19/00 . chapter 4
That was really good! Yes! You put Taiora in it!

Thank you soooooo much!
volta arovet 12/14/00 . chapter 5
I've enjoyed this entire series so far. It's very well written and creative. I know a review should be constructive, but I really can't find anything that you could improve, and that's a large compliment in itself. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next section. -Val
Thinker 12/14/00 . chapter 5
Excellent. Superb writing, my friend. The quiet, uneasy suspense of this chapter shows your patience with the story and allows for good pacing. I'll be waiting for the next part, and, to make sure I don't miss it, you're going on my author alert. _
Thinker 12/14/00 . chapter 4
Well, I've finally caught up. I'd also like to offer you my congratulations on a fantastic series. You've got a great style, a fantastic attention to detail, and you've managed to keep things in character. Your skill is obvious and I know that the world of digimon fanfics would benefit from having more writers with your kind of talent. I'll be thanking Ryan Berke for turning me on to you. In the meantime, I'm off to find chapter 5.
ts 12/13/00 . chapter 5
another great fic! awesome how tai reflects on the digidestined towards the end...can't wait for the continuation!
Ryan Berke 12/13/00 . chapter 5
And an already great epic becomes even better. For fear of sounding monotonous, Beautifully crafted piece of work!
Pikachumaniac 12/12/00 . chapter 5
*Pikachumaniac on hands and knees* Please please please please continue!
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