this was awesome! Really great interpretaion of the movie

aw, horray! You did great with the suspence; I was definetely afraid this was going to turn out jack/david! I really liked how you followed the script too, it makes it seem more authentic _

Beautiful... just beautiful. .fits perfectly into the movie. So touching.. they're my favorite pair y'know. :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! it's so real. write another. luv yas!

I basically love this story. It was really good and well written. Accents are down nicely.

aw! this was way cute! I loved it!

HAZZAGRIFF

OHMIGOD! That was so cute! Have you written more stories? Please email me with your reply!

Awww, that was soooooooo CUTE! I loved it, it

made me smiel alot, LoL! Spotty is so adorable

when he's jealous. He shoulda hit Davey with that

shooter! :laughs sinisterly: Ah well, this was

great. I hope you write more like it!

m.d.

SQUEEEE!

:: waves Spot/Jack flag::

So very sexellent, so magnificent. SPOT/JACK. mmm. There really is so much sexual tension in that scene. Anyway, welcome to the Slashy Ladies of the Newsiesfandom!

SPOT JACK OH MY GOD THAT PAIRING DOES SO MUCH TO ME IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND OH MY GOD THEY WOULD BE SO SEXY AND CUTE TOGETHER AND OH MY GOD

Good luck in your band competition! :)

AWWWWWWWWWW, that was REALLY cute. I have to admitt, I'm not much of a slash fan, and even I Loved this one. It was awesome how you got into all their behind-the-scenes emotions and stuff, very well done! Write more soon!

*Crunch*

NEVEH FEAH, BROOKLYN'S HEAH! **Mondie grabs Mushy Banana Boy's hands and they run around in circles screaming Spot's line**

::ahem::

Sorry, don't know what came over me.

Yay, slashness and seeing the "nicer" side of Spot! The vulnerability was surprising. I always make him hard and glaring at everyone/thing in the world. Haha! But yay, you made everything happy. And Davey's just oblivious to the world. **Mondie laughs and hugs Davey** Ah, Davey. Such a funny character...

Yay for band! What instrument do you play? I am a perc. Whoo whoo! We don't go to competitions, though, which I find sad. We only do our football games, and last night was my first Friday night off in ten weeks! I was so excited. Heh.

Great story, I can't wait to read more of yours. I believe you have another story up I was thinking about reading... perhaps I will now... I'm not sure. But good job!

STD*CDBPTF*OMBMMGLN*AAARHYK*YWNBNQYPP,

*Mondie*

Weeee