*Gasp!* This is the first fanfiction I ever read in my life! (Three years ago? I think I was nine...) It's still so beautiful and emotional and amazing!

your plot is the best, but not to be offensive or anything but your story structure is a little off

Hey, this was great! I really like this fanfic. The only thing that needed some more work was the 3rd chapter. After the frist two chapters, the last one did not meet the standards. Nonetheless, it was great. Keep up the good work.

*Sniff* So beautiful. Keep it up!

Yusuke is lost - IN HIS MENTALITY! Keiko is a hard-hearted bitch that needs to be run over by a car (like Yusuke was in the beginning of the series)! How could you do this to Yusuke! YOU SUCK!

Lovely story. The words flowed together nicely. Good job. _

Oh! Fics like this are the reason I keep coming here! This is so good, and so true to the story! I love it, you have to do another!

i just want to tell u how much i love this fic. i read it for the first time on anothe website and just had to print it out. im glad u put it here too so now i can tell u what i think of it. this is without a doubt the best fan fiction i have ever read keep up the great work!

do another chapter about the wedding!otherwise its perfect!

Oh! I really love this story! It is sooooo good!:) Good Job! I hope you can write more story about this perfect couple, 'cause they also my most favour:)

Lovely.. Yusuke and Keiko are hardly ever mentioned! *sniffle* Your very good!