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Susan Simeon 2007-12-11 ch 22, anon.	abuseTo the delightful author of this story, I will find you if you don't finish this story soon and when i do I'll have totured by The Dentist everyday till you finish. do you have any idea how annoying it is to keep trying to imagine how it ended. Please, complete.
Annika 2006-11-13 ch 22, anon.	abuseI would like to see more of Francie and Will. I'm not above begging though: pleasepleaseplease write some more! I'm hopelessly hooked! See? annika
qblisa 2006-08-04 ch 22,	abuseOMG... What a fantastic Sarkney story. I absolutely loved it! I just wish you will one day finish it. It seems a real shame that such a great story is incomplete. And to topit all off, you left it at a cliffhanger. I was intrugued by the way you started the story from the different POVs, following the shows storyline, and then turned it into something original. Please update this story. You probably don't have enough time in your busy life and you may have lost your passion for Alias, but your fans will be forever grateful. Lisa :)
All Mighty Terrestrial 2006-07-12 ch 22,	abuse(cackle) Excellent. More?
phi4858 2006-04-17 ch 22,	abuseSince your story took two years to develop (you did it well and an interesting style) there is still hope that you will finish this, won't you?
aliaslover14 2006-02-28 ch 17,	abusehaha so it has been forever since you updated, but i enjoyed this story so much i thought i would review anyway. Well, i mean it rocked. What else is there to say?
jamie 2005-10-06 ch 22, anon.	abuseWow, i love this story! Please keep writing on it (and keep posting)! We definitly need to see a sark/syd hookup!!
jamie 2005-10-06 ch 22, anon.	abuseWow, i love this story! Please keep writing on it (and keep posting)! We definitly need to see a sark/syd hookup!!
Elizayars 2005-07-16 ch 22,	abuseI found myself obsessed with this fanfic tonight- and bam! no more story...I’m totally sad now. It was so great and sassy...and I could practically smell the Sark nakidness ( yum yum ) ... please write more...watch season 2 and just soak up the Sark- and your Muse will be So So So So happy, and you'll start writing again- and I will be so so so happy. See how this happiness circle works? So easy - go start now. Go.
jaka ray 2004-12-19 ch 22,	abusegroan at the cliffhanger and hope like he-mingway that you know where this story is going because i fouling want you to go on.. hope you have a muse too. hop from foot to foot in impatience suggestions... no suggestions. sorry. oh yea. one suggestion: SARKNEY! yay!! ahem. ok getting serious. um. ok so sydney's still at the house.. called vaughn apparentally so you DO know where thats going (ay-yi!) (and having only watched season three, AH DONT KILL ME, i dont know what the foul mt sebacio is... unless that's something a/u...mk.) and sark/irina/jack have just been confronted by sloane. he's got some kind of hold on sydney, either that or he's bluffing. could it be that he's got vaughn on a leash (cuz sloane's got alice or something? idunno.) and so when sydney calls vaughn in (GAH! it's back to vaughn. no, sydney, no! bad girl, bad! use "agent vaughn", sydney! bad bad bad! hope no s/v happens if she does call him in, although i suppose it's inevitable) she's unknowingly putting herself in danger. sark finds this all out and while irina and jack deal w/ sloane he rushes to help sydney. (the fact that alias can happen all over the globe confuses me. so syd's in encino -uh is that in the u.s.?- and vaughn's in la. sark/irina/jack/sloane are in russia safehouse somewhre - you mentioned that but i didn't bother to retain the info - and so... how's sark going to reach her in time? GASP! and when he gets to her, he/she takes out vaughn - YES!- or vaughn's already taken her to mt sebacio under sloane's orders. sorry, i'm intent on making vaughn the badguy. ok if he wasn't the bad guy he could a) confront her again and aruge about sark until the man himself showed up b) not show up and syd'd be on her own c) vaughn'd just help sydney try to get away from the spy life pwahahaha and either be knocked out by sark or.. wahtever. ..you know, it'd suck if you already had the rest of the story planned out and i was just ranting this whole time, but whatever it takes to get this story going!) onwards and upwards. if this helps, i really love your writing and the way you've written irina is bewitchingly funny. (the whole fu--mble thing had me grinning like a ... sark. not to mention the " for heaven’s sake, Jack, he’s turning blue, do ease up" part! HAH! >:D) feel free to email me anytime if it helps. i'm obessed with this story. ca_frany@
jaka ray 2004-12-19 ch 18,	abuseheh. this is moving a bit too fast for my tastes. i suggest that after every chapter that's in the whole short-dialogue-followed-by-one-sentence-paragraphs format, you have a chapter that has a more fleshed out, descpritive manner that catches feeling and dwells on it. i'm more than sure that you're capable of that. however, am glad that you've already written the next chapter. onward and upwards.
jaka ray 2004-12-19 ch 17,	abusewell... i of course really like the way you'r going with this. this chapter didn't SUCK it was just REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY CONFUSING. suggestions (PS i think it's cute how you've got all these quotes from songs/movies/watever... :) nice) (because it's unjustifiable to criticize w/o suggestions. that should be life's silver!** norm - haha go vaughn hos- and yea.) ok it took a while for me to find out who said what in the whole thing. maybe you could've added descriptions after each dialogue to let the reader know WHO said WHICH quote because you'd have a paragraph from sydney's point of view, and then in a new paragraph you'd have a dialogue which i thot was from somebody else but in fact was sydney talking again. recap: INSTEAD OF ~She was so in love with him, but knew she couldn't show it. new paragraph "Go to hell, you."~ , FORMAT IT LIKE THIS ~SHe was so in love with him, but knew she couldnt' show it. new SENTENCE "Go to hell, you"~ oh yes, revel at my creative writing skills. other than the above suggestion, i love it.
jaka ray 2004-12-19 ch 11,	abusebartender's note? did i miss something by skimming through your delightful ficcy? you mean "Sark on the Beach" is like, a website or soemthing? and they have a bartender that you got wines/drinks from? shrug ok, i love this! because not only is it SARKNEY (woot), but it's got hints of vaughn-bashing (featherlight... but non-vaughn nonetheless- oo! :D)
jaka ray 2004-12-19 ch 4,	abusei adore your writing. i love your style. it kicks **. enough said. reading on...
raven 2004-12-13 ch 22, anon.	abuseo my god i love it the sarcasum i love i absolutly love the sarcasum keep going plz-anna

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