this is a great story. It could use a beta, but not in any great degree. I'd really love to see Willow kick ** and take names for once...

your story is sick twisted and I love you for it because everyone has to love dru and evil will goes a long way with anyone, or maybe its just a thing for read heads, but I must say your story is oen of the best aftermath of dark will ever its just perfect and I can't wait to read more from you.

very disturbing but still i read parts of it. have u ever thought about writing erotic lesbian thiller/ romance novels with a supernatural twist. this aint my kind of style but its still good writing.

Love the new chapter! :) Can't wait for the next one. The club was a good idea.

I just want to tell you how much I love this story. I've read all ten chapters, and I'm glad you've finally updated! :) I have absolutely no criticsm for this! This is beautifully written: mysterious, imaginative, evocative. I reviewed it before, but I think you reposted it. Anyways, don't let a lack of reviews keep you from posting the rest of this! It's already in my vault of favorites. ;) Great job!