this is the best **' story ever! please write more as soon as you can!!

Great, you updated!
Loved the chapter, and glad to see things have cleared up btw the guys etc. Plz update soon. This is a gr8 story.

+to my fav stories.

I just sat down and read all eight chapters and all Ican say is, WOW! Excellent story so far. I like the intesity between Raph and Leo and how no matter what Raph said or did, Leo still came through. Although, I did at first want to smack him for being so cold.
Great descriptive writing and very intense. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Great story. Keep it up.

This story was referred to my by Buslady. I'm sure you know of her - a die hard Raphael fan.

Nicely done story. Love the descriptive scenes. In the beginning, it was so easy to feel Raphael's loneliness and pain. Great job there.

Ah, so in some small way, the weight of his loneliness will be lightened somewhat with this rescue and assist.

I hope so, anyway.

Be blessed.

You write an incredible story. Your diction and writing are almost unparalleled. Please continue this story (please, please don't leave it unfinished). I am sure I would enjoy any Turtle fiction would saw fit to write in the future. Making it Raph-centric wouldn't hurt either ;)

Hey! Just wanted to say that it pains me that this hasn't gotten more reviews. I really wanted to know how more people reacted to this chapter.

I went back and read the first few chapters again, just to refresh my memory, and I LOVE this. It's really too bad that R fics on this sight don't get the attention that they deserve...

Hopefully the inspiration is still flowing for another one soon!

-SB
btw, I extremely appreciate your reviews and taking the time to read everything! :)

The theatre scene is so raph...kinda stuff just makes me wanna take care of him for ever & ever...

Aw man...dang...

please tell me you will write more often. I almost forgot about this fic!

That is one of them most amazing chapters I've ever read concerning Raph.
The poor thing denying himself what he wants...

YOU ROCK!

I was starting to wonder where you went...hehe, but you write a lot like me. The last couple weeks I've been working on my story, and I'm almost ready to post the first three chapters. But the inspiration definitely comes in waves! (You caught an AWESOME WAVE for this chapter!)

Great job conveying Raphael's emotion. You're descriptions really made me feel it from him. I really like Yom too...she's one tough ** chick!

Ok, I really have nothing to critic because this was perfect. What a twist at the end - hope to hear from you again soon!

Note - I had an author alert for this story, but when I pulled up it didn't appear under the updated stories...hopefully it will soon, because people should be reading this!

All the love, SASSYBLONDE

Hey Sporkey, this is fantastic! I'm so excited that you updated! I had to check you out after you posted on s979's site, and the publish date on this one made me think that you had called it quits. But you're back with a vengence! I loved the April/Raph kiss...everyone knows that they have a special bond, and you wrote it beautifully. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING! You have a lot to be proud of. -SB

Rather interesting story, plz update soon!

good lord where's the NEXT CHAPTER? Cmon!

Raph needs it...let him have it...

Girl i have to agree with all of the writers or just reader that gave you a review, this also goes along with the other two stories that you wrote. you have a way of making me imagan (cant spell) everything in detail. i love it. its also like im right in it i can see everything clearly. any ways ill see you in school.