I think this story is going great! U should keep updating, please!

I think this story is going great! U should keep updating, please!

This is THE best Yu-Gi-Oh fic ever please please update it and don't give it up.

Okay...
*deep breath*
UPDATE! Updateupdateupdate!!
I wanna see more!!
And you're lazy!
So UPDATE!

UPDATE!

I like it... except for one thing...

you really need to work on your formatting

Do NOT, under any circumstances whatsoever, end this fic!...Okay...PLEASE don't end this fic? PLEAASE?

This is very adorable. And very confusing. You aren't done with it, are you?

Cool...read it all awesome. Update soon

Congratulations. I actually had to scroll down to choose the chapter.

It all makes sense to me. Very Mary-Suey, and such a fanfic. (If ‘tis possible to say such insults w/o insulting.) But still a pretty darn good one. ‘Tis as if you were challenged to write a respectable Mary-Sue.
I love the mazeness of the manor.
Pirates are cool, very cool. Our mascot is the buccaneer.
Still a wonderful story which I shall continue to watch for. Take your time, and have fun.

Much more interesting than a card game! Probably should have let Hell-Carcus, I mean Hel-Carasus die. Come on, the man (and I use the word reluctantly) forces you to play or die, and maybe still die. Either a plot devise (in this story, never) or he's up to no good. I suppose it sould be that he was following orders of someone else, but that's reading a little too far into things on my part. How big!? Little thing, but the ending with a paragraph of just "There were seven of them in total"; nice.

Boo hoo, now I really do have to wait while you work. Either that or force you to rush and have something not worth reading. *gasps!* Never! *sits on floor twidleing thumbs* Oh. Don't mind me. Have fun, working.

No;no;no! I can't wait! I- Huh, chapter 11? Whew, for a minute there I thought I would be forced to join the ranks of the waiting. Heh, heh. No, but seriously, I am enjoying this story and am pleased to see continue.

Not DIE like some people I could mention. *shifty eyes*.

As to an actual review: very clever how you connected the continuity(?) of the cannon plot. Good show, but, "Muffin-Man"?

Ahh. I havn't read the next manga yet (the one with Death-T),so I don't know much about it yet. Sigh. Oh well. Again, BRAVO.

I too now own a Yu-Gi-Oh ticket. As well as a never opened movie card which I carry for 'luck'. (More like to keep my sister from opening it.) Little thing, but I liked the added spacing before the last line. Especially 'dramatic' when read in a small window. NEXT!

Major shocker. I like to think of myself as somewhat perceptive, but your story is throwing me for a loop. How could I not see such obvious plot details. A: When they are well palyed out. Bravo!