happy ending! yay :) great story, loved it

Part 2 of my comments. I imagine the Dark Lords as being mirror images of the Magic Knights, voices and all. Yep. Tori Amos to 3 Doors Down to Tori again to...never mind. Indian-style...a reference to Buddha, I assume? This is your shortest fanfic? I don't think so.

You really know how to work around certain limitations. And you've got so much to present! So many multi-chaptered stories...okay, so it's a familiar concept, but still. Too bad I couldn't catch the moral here. I'm slow to catch on, what can I say?

Uh, Clef? You and many other inhabitants of Cephiro’s universe ARE humans. I think you mean “terrestrials”. Your archives and mine are very expansive. “You won’t get away with this.” I hear that phrase too much. Great. I've been reading so long, I'm losing myself. Hopefully I'll have more to say in the next review.

yay! wow that was good.

Oh, that was such a nice ending! Darn, I always feel sad after I've finished a story. IT'S ALL OVER!

Well, at least there are more stories of yours to read. And more clemi. Magga Camara, but I love Clemi.

All hail Umi-chan3!

*lots of praises all around*

Clef *would* be competitive, wouldn't he?

Once again, poor Umi...

Poor Umi. She get's beat up a lot, doesn't she?

Aug!

*grumble grumble*

I really hate cliffhangers, you know? I just wanted to say that I really like how you've got Clef and Umi fighting. That's my favorite romance- where the people start off hating each other, or at least bickering. I like that Nori is in the story, too. It's fun having characters be jealous!

And no, I did not see anything to critisize.

*smiles*

Be safe, have fun, you know.

The usual.

Hiddenstars

I luvd this story!

happy ending!did they detroy the dark lords?

Ok i don't want to write a review for every chapter so i'll just say that i love almost everyone of them and the ones that aren't done, plz update! _

luv ya

Aww...so cute! You are an awsome wrighter!

SO SAD! *sniffle* ASCOT! At least Umi is kind to him, and they are friends. I just feel so sorry for him! Aw, well. This story is very well written, great job!

Wow great ending. Yes, I think that one page was all it really needed. I read your new fic and I love it so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter of that and your other uncompleted fics. Till the next chapter of one of those, ja ne!