I think that this was a well-written story and I fully priase you for that!

this was very good. may i suggest another sequel? think about it. sinse anikin didn't choose the dark path...u could rewrite the entire star wars saga. or just have anikin fall for real sometime down the road...think his chidren are dead...yadda yadda u can figure out the rest.one other suggestion...flush the swear words will ya? they add nothing to the story.

Great story. Puts a differant light on Palpatine. Is this saying he is not sidious or he double talking again. Glad to see Ani not on the dark side.

This story was really good...and well done! I really loved it!

Plausible and believeable, if sad, explination for Anakin's ancestory. You managed to write this in just the right way to make us feel deeply for him. Keep up the good work.

This has always been my most favorite Natalie Merchant song. It fits very well with the story you're telling and I love the idea of an AU where Anakin doesn't turn. Nicely done. *s*

You're right; that song *does* fit Anakin. I must say I prefer this story to its prequel. :)

Another great one, Kitten! Keep writin' em' up! :)

Oh! I loved them both!

I loved the ending it was soooooo happy and stuff! Great story!

excellent story. i love your work . . . can't wait for the next one!