Reviews for The Invincible
Arciam 8/21/09 . chapter 1
Sweet
takuya 2/25/05 . chapter 1
that was incredible i loved it tons
twincast 3/2/03 . chapter 1
*feels all warm inside* very sweet!
Too Short 12/1/02 . chapter 1
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
Too Short 12/1/02 . chapter 1
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
Too Short 12/1/02 . chapter 1
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
lecada chan 11/17/02 . chapter 1
awww...that's so sweet! and the typical reactions from the rest of them...*grins* well done.
Guest 11/13/02 . chapter 1
Umm...Is that it? Where is the rest?
suddenly apples 11/6/02 . chapter 1
*snickers* and yes, i think you came across very well with strong imagery. and i especially love the phrase "reincarnation of a hero long gone" it sounds so cool! anyway, yeah *waves a daiken flag*
Nine1 11/4/02 . chapter 1
Soooo cuuuuute! Heh, the others' reactions...it's been a while, huh? Missed you! (Who else makes me choke on fluff with a stupid grin on my face as well as you can?) Hope you write more soon! I'll be looking out for you.
Angel of Peace 11/3/02 . chapter 1
ack! So cute!
that is secret 11/3/02 . chapter 1
There, there, cry not. *hands Kat a tissue*
Lula 11/3/02 . chapter 1
That was sooo sweet! Very good.
Only Leigh 11/3/02 . chapter 1
Cyuuutttte *_* your writing is awsome!