this is awsome. the next time someone asks me how seto/jou works, i am going to point them right to this

I like the fic but...I REALLY like the poem. I don't usually read fanfiction poems-even though, yes, the first thing I was brave enough to post was a poem, ugh-but...This was quite good.

Sasunaru, Sakuino, Sakulee, Ruchigo, Shinokiba, Nejishika, Daiken... and now SetoJou? you know I could go on and list all the pairings I adore that you've written about...

All my faves, right here under your username link... you are awesome! not only that, but they're sweet, mostly short and they often dance around a point; subtle hints and such. I love it! -hugs-

-Spaz

nice very nice

good ficcy! I like the concept...

Love those rules. Nicely done. Beautiful language.

that was just amazing...

I like choosing lines that really stick out for me, and the one in this story was: "Give them a week; then they'll know what a sweet agony love really is. Give them a month, they'll be ready to die for each other without flinching and still never say a word as to why." Very... poignant? I'm not sure. But I like it Nice theory, adept comparison, very fitting lyrics at the end.

Oh. Like.
This style is very much like the song- very liquid and flowing. And I liked how you used some of the lyrics of the song... without making those:
blahblahblah
lyriclyriclyric
blahblahblah
Yeah. Good incorporation.

Awesome! I love the depth in it - and I love the song, lol. Man, the irony... XD
Anyway, like I said, I love how it explored them, their roles with Yuugi (that was very interesting), and then each other, and their similiarities - and those last three lines were terrific! *thumbs up*
all in all, I just love it.
- ashes -

i like your story

I'm sorry, but this read less like an actual fanfic and more like the author saying, "Kaiba and Jounouchi are SO shipped!" in 934 words.

the style of writing is new, at least to me and i really like it!

Sque! I love it. Just love it. It's beautiful and perfect and so incredibly *accurate*! _ *glomps you* That was awesome. XD

May I tell you how good this is? *Makes wibble eyes* Very...! And deed too!

Uh... maybe I shouldent read such deep thing so early in the mourning... *Looks around*