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Xpectashauns 6/25/08 . chapter 4
This is a very humorous fic and I'm glad I ran into it. It's been a while since you've updated and I hope you do soon.

Great story!
Kenshin-gotenks 4/13/06 . chapter 4
MORE UPDATE!
LavendarMirai 11/19/05 . chapter 4
HAHAHAHHA

these are hillarious. please tell me that they are still being written
love.strawberries 5/8/05 . chapter 4
Hahaha, this story was funny!
diamond.ash 1/17/05 . chapter 4
I know that you haven't updated in forever, and this is probably pointless but...

PLEASE UPDATE! I'M BEGGING YOU!

*Ahem* I'm done.

But please update!

PS. If you do don't forget to add lots of Juu/Trunks action!
Juunana 1/9/05 . chapter 4
xD DEAR GODS. This is hilarious. PLEASE update son.
anonymous 1/6/05 . chapter 4
This is a wonderful story. It is humorous, has yaoi/shonen ai, but still keeps people mostly in character. Please, update soon.
leelee3 12/26/04 . chapter 4
Oh, heck yeah! Looks like we have an update! (like a month ago, but whatever...) I really enjoy this, and I hope that you don't give up on it! Keep updating!
MiraiMera 11/10/04 . chapter 4
This is one of the best goofy humor fics I've ever read. It's truly creative and funny. And it could actually serve as a good guide to writing shonen-ai and yaoi for those talentless, tasteless hacks who write grammatically incorrect smut _
Rosalyn Angel 11/9/04 . chapter 4
Raidne! OMG! I've missed reading your stuff! XP I'm so glad you updated, even if it was really short... It WAS Piccolo and Dende, after all. I have to say that chapter three is still my favorite. The intercom incident with Mirai and Juunana gets me everytime _

"Kiss my ass, Juunana."

"Get in line."

ROFL.

I guess Tomorrow Never Knows is kinda dead, huh? This makes me sad. If you ever do start it up again, I'd definitely keep reading it! Take care!

-RA, out
Ore No Kagami 11/6/04 . chapter 4
Atarah: Yea! She updated!

Goten: But...it was so short...and only one suggestive line! What is this world coming to?

Atarah: Well, she did update, and a update is an update is an update, so what does that make an update?

Goten & Juu-kun: AN UPDATE! WE GET IT!

Atarah: *sighs* Well, how bout anohter update? *ears move with happyness* Can the teachers be Trunks and Vegeta...or, maybe They get Trunks back and since Goku missed his teaching date, he and Trunks teach? Maybe this lesson could be on incest?

Goten: Incest?

Atarah: What? I'm just throwing ideas around.

Juu-kun: ...yeah, and 100MPH

Goten: And what about hose V/T doujinshi's I found? Hm?

Atarah: *Blush* um...Juukun left them! Yeah! thats it! yup! They are Juu-kuns!

Juu-kun: Are you trying to frame me again?

Atarah: Um wel...anyways! I'm shure Vegeta-chan would love some Trunks/Kakarot interaction *starts to drool*
Ore No Kagami 10/29/04 . chapter 3
*sitting in a chair, stairing at the story "Lessons for the Yaoi, Shounen Ai Writer"*

*starts rocking*

*starts crying*

Trunks and Juunanagou come in.

Juu-kun: She's been like this for months.

Trunks: I know...I wonder what is wrong...

*they go up to Atarah*

Trunks: C-chan, is everything okay?

Juu-kun: You seem... a little distracted...

Trunks: Here let me turn that off for you *is about to turn computer off*

Atarah: *hisses at Trunks, and hold computer* they will update soon, I know it...

Juu-kun: C-chan, maybe you should just give up on it, they are most likely not going to update...its been over a year C-chan...just give up...

C-chan: *sniff sniff* but...i wanted to see you two make out again!

Juu-kun: *smirk* yeah...me too c-chan, me too.

*juu-kun and Trunks try and pull Atarah away from computer but shes holding onto the desk*

Atarah: You can't make me leave! You can't!
Ravenpan 4/4/04 . chapter 3
ROTF'nFLOL! oh please do continue!
Kia 1/2/04 . chapter 3
Absolutely Excellent!
I had tears in my eyes I was laughing so hard when Vegeta was so rudely interrupted my Juunana and Trunks' make out session over the intercom!
I certainly hope to see more!
Rhiannon Kage 11/22/03 . chapter 3
XD! SO funny!

He points at the intercom; his finger is shaking from rage. Actually his entire body is shaking from rage. “Keep you filthy hands off of my son, you damn android!”

XD! I luff it. CONTINUE!
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