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Reviews for: The Panic In Me
thissimplefeeling 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Mmmmmmmmmm nice. They are loooovely. (And I just ignore Chel.) 3 3 3
TTCyclone 10/9/09 . chapter 1
Your right, they are so dang cute! Dang those animators! lol good story
The Unbreakable Snape Fan 9/7/07 . chapter 1
Nice.

Makes me wish I was better at reviewing.
Angst Is My Middle Name 6/18/07 . chapter 1
oh yay! this made me happy! *hands cookie to author*
coolmarauders 8/22/05 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute! TULIO IS MINE! MINE, I TELL YOU!
Case Number 241 10/30/04 . chapter 1
That was the sweetest fic ever!

i love it!

And you completely forget about Chel in that...iz so cute!

I never thought anyone had heard the song except for me! so adorable!
Shimmerwings 12/4/02 . chapter 1
Definitely cute. I'm really fascinated by the whole past history between them. I'd be interested to read a story about it if you ever decided to write it *hinthint* Unless you already have and I haven't read it yet... *goes to read more of your fics.

Anyway, on to constructiveness...overall, it was written pretty well. The thing I think I'd look out for most is your pronouns. They get very vague and ambiguous at points. Sometimes I didn't know which "he" you were referring to. Interesting use of flashbacks and dreams.

And, gotta love the slashy goodness.
Jehan's Muse 11/19/02 . chapter 1
Awww! Slashiness...adorable slashiness...I love this stuff, I really do. Tulio and Miguel are simply adorable. Great job.
Karu Leonnese 11/5/02 . chapter 1
Ooh! I luves dream-angst ficcies! . And yes, they are both TERRIBLY CUTE! I giggle at it constantly, and do random movie quotes which most people don't unterstand! And these fics are so COOOOOOOL! .
HMC 11/4/02 . chapter 1
YEEHAW! Boy, that was great. THey so sweeeeet. Hm, but now I'm curious about that dream... Why DID they take Tulio's ribbon? OOH! Write a chapter describing the dreams!

:::::is whacked on the head by author:::::::

Hmm. Sowee. But your story rocked!
HanajimaFB 11/3/02 . chapter 1
O.O sooo...freekkking...cuttee...
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