will come back to write the sequel?

or tell me the sequel if you already wrote it before i take the time to see myself?

i enjoyed this fanfict when i should have been getting ready for school

so it was that good hehehe

utterly halarious

i didnt read the disclaimer so i thought this was a cross over with ranma 1/2 and i was right!

this will be very interesting read

THis story was simply amazing to read! i was like wtf and rage mode throu it but it was in the end just a beautiful way to finish it.

i thik a story on imp sounds fun but, it will have a lot to bring to surpass this one for this i will say was one of the best stories ive read on this site. thts alot.

wonderful job and keep up the amazing work!

Hello, I'm a new member to this site but have been visiting it a reading it for a few years now. I have just read through your complete story "The Torment" and I must say, you did a terrific job on combining two great anime/manga's. If I could rate it I would most definately give it a 15 out of 10 :) I can't wait to read any other of your stories.

You DEFINITELY should do a sequel! I read this whole story in one night and it was absolutely attention grabbing! You are a good writer!

Oh my... this was definatly an interesting read. At first I just clicked on this story for the hell of it. I figgured it would probubly just end up be some rediculouse crack fic, but it turned out to be nothing like I expected. Witch in this case was a good thing! It had substance and interesting twists and turns. Definatly something worth reading twice, maybe more. Yay for piccolo and Gohan!

hahahahahaha, the asteroid was priceless

yes you should write! and do it now, i loved it!

aw you should have the lemony goodness in there...i need it!

aww that's so cute! w

she's really naive. 3

-still laughing-

pbbt...mmph...BWAHAHAHAHA!

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OMG, LIEK, LMFAO!

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Great Fic and great Final. Sequel! Sequel!

Wow Wow, this FanFic is so good O.o

Only one question... where is the lemon? I dont read any lemmon _

So cute, did you write the sequel? Would love to read one! V&T