Hey very nice!
I loved your careful descriptions... and also the way you gave us a scene from her childhood. I believe no one's done that before, and originality's always a great thing ;)
I'd be a real treat to see something longer in the future. Keep writing!

Your fanfic is nice and quite interesting too. Please make a new chapter.

please write more, i loves this movie and would love to read more about it:)

I like this :)