| Reviews for Hitomi's Past |
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DragonFire Princess 4/5/10 . chapter 4Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP! |
SlayerBunny 4/9/05 . chapter 4gr8 story please carry on i wanna find out what happens, especially between hitomi and van! Update soon! _ |
mystlady 5/7/03 . chapter 4I didnt even know this was Sailor Moon/Escaflowne! I'm glad that I stumbled into this fanfic! Great storyline. You even managed to include the outer scouts in here. Oh, I was hoping Folken might be here in the fic... Oh, watch out for the Japanese/dubbed names though... |
Yumeko Tenshino 2/19/03 . chapter 4HEY i love it so much! can't wait for more _. It's marvelous. only i can't imagine hitomi with long hair. But hey cool story all the same, serena. |
Luna-Sarita 1/6/03 . chapter 1Great Job |
Joey 12/15/02 . chapter 4 yo, I may not be the most knowledgeable person on the subject, but i know good writing when i see it, and I saw it here. Well done, maybe a little heavy on the ol' adverbs after speech though. other than that, prefection |
Xelena 11/23/02 . chapter 3that a good chapter- however, you got a couple things wrong: Millerna is Queen of Asturia, not Austria. And Hitomi's Star Key should become a staff if it's like Pluto's. In other words, if it really looks like how you're describing, then it would be a staff not a glaive. A glaive is a type of stave, and is what Saturn has- the Silence Glaive. A staff has no blade whereas a glaive does. but keep up the good work none the less |
Xelena 11/10/02 . chapter 2i love it thus far. |
Xelena 11/10/02 . chapter 2 hi again that's evil! oh, wait, that's your point in doing that. anyways, i like the set-up. i have a feeling Isabelle's is one of the bad guys. |
LOVE WITCH 11/9/02 . chapter 2 AHHHHHHHHHH! explosive chappie. Why is hitomi doing this? Come and get next chapter out soon! |
Lady Megami 11/7/02 . chapter 1Hey Serena! THis story Sounds pretty good...i like your other one better though..when is chapter 9 coming! |
Sunny Junoir D 11/7/02 . chapter 1 the story hitomi's Past is really cool, i really enjoyed reading. I don't think theres anything really need to be change in the content. Anyways, its a amazing/fastinating story. |
ID Number 63466 11/6/02 . chapter 1Hehe Very Good Start - Hope ya Continue! hehe |
Xelena 11/5/02 . chapter 1i like it a lot... so please continue soon. |
Guest 11/4/02 . chapter 1 very cute! continue! |