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Jeni2
2002-11-12
ch 1,
abuseVERY good story, looking forward to more Scorpy-Sikozu fic. You portrayed the characters really well, lots of congratulations!

Lots of hugs 'n' bugs,
Jeni :-P (and the mysterious rubber chicken called Scorpius)
AstroGirl
2002-11-05
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this! The dialog only-format works so well that I'm not sure I would have even noticed that it was done that way if you hadn't pointed it out. And the characterization and the chess metaphor are dead-on perfect. I really want to see more Scorpy-Sikozu stories...
d-mouse
2002-11-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseWay awesome. You know there just had to be a conversation along those lines somewhere in there.
Sweet Thing1
2002-11-04
ch 1,
abuseI reviewed this over at Kansas, but it's so good, you deserve another ;)

I love this; a clever use of dialog only and the voices are just perfect. Thanks for sharing.

Sweet
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