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| Jeni2 2002-11-12 ch 1, | abuseVERY good story, looking forward to more Scorpy-Sikozu fic. You portrayed the characters really well, lots of congratulations! Lots of hugs 'n' bugs, Jeni :-P (and the mysterious rubber chicken called Scorpius) |
| AstroGirl 2002-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! The dialog only-format works so well that I'm not sure I would have even noticed that it was done that way if you hadn't pointed it out. And the characterization and the chess metaphor are dead-on perfect. I really want to see more Scorpy-Sikozu stories... |
| d-mouse 2002-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWay awesome. You know there just had to be a conversation along those lines somewhere in there. |
| Sweet Thing1 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI reviewed this over at Kansas, but it's so good, you deserve another ;) I love this; a clever use of dialog only and the voices are just perfect. Thanks for sharing. Sweet |