 RebeccaRoy 2009-01-26 . chapter 1Wow I liked this, it was very good. |
 Elsa2 2008-10-16 . chapter 1 Loved the intensity. Great story. Poor Remus. |
 Isabelle Adamowitz 2006-12-04 . chapter 1I liked the last sentence very much. It's comforting, because it seems like something everyone's mum has told them when they were little and afraid of the dark... (wtf am I saying?) Anyhow, the writing is good, intersting how you've simplified Sirius' thoughts as a dog... logical though. Good job.
Isa |
 Little Wolf 2004-08-18 . chapter 1 *howls, shaken* Your writing form is amazing! I loved it. One thing, though: Silver only kills when mixed with blood--it's not like it burns through the skin. |
 Doctor Zosfmov 2004-03-08 . chapter 1How sad.
The part with Peter resisting the imperius was just beautiful; it was a nice touch.
The change from Padfoot to Sirius was clear and well performed.
Zosfmov. |
 Moongirl 2002-11-04 . chapter 1Oh good this is so sad, will there be another chapter? PLEASE??!! |
 Laurus Nobilis 2002-11-03 . chapter 1That was amazing! Bold point of view- I've never seen something like that before. And it works, it really works. I like how you can make the story clear with so little words.
Great job! |
 kat 2002-11-03 . chapter 1 YAY! no one dies! I like that and it means there is hope for remus! bravo...pity its a one-shot |