  DarkLegion 2004-12-06 . chapter 1 Really good, but, please update soon! I want to read more! |
| BVKBNJKHGCBF 2003-05-18 . chapter 1 ARE YOU ON DURGS? |
| hdfgvsd 2003-05-12 . chapter 1 Ok, how come that ** Yolei girl is almost all in your ff8 fics!! Will you just make a Zell fic that doesn't have that freaky **?! ** all of you!! Suck my dick!! Yolei Yolei hi hoo!! |
| spinnetrecords 2003-03-24 . chapter 1 What the hell? I've played FF8 and read hentai but... what the hell? However, you gotta love unnecessarily bloody and profane stories. Keep writing. |
 TheDancingCow 2002-11-03 . chapter 1I really enjoy how you setup the story but you need to make a new chapter whever someones going to talk. I got a bit confused. |
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