Hey - you had something good going here, why did you abandon it. We need all the good Max and Logan we can get. Please come back. VS3 was our hope and now it's more S-2 than S-2 was. Please give us Max and Logan. Thanks for great writing.

Who is Logan calling? I´m waiting for more.

poor old Logie. tee hee hee. more please

Great attention to detail: Max's wet hair bouncing off her shoulders as she walked; the trickle of water over her throat and between her breats. *Very* readable and fun.

LOL!!! keep going!!!

Nice job :) You captured the scene perfectly. I loved it. I hope you extend the episode and write more than 3, with lots of shippy stuff. LOL.

its all good

That was pretty good. I hope to see more soon. ^_~

great chapter to a great fic. "Out" is a very good episode of S1 and reading and insight of it is sure a great thing. I hope you have some new stuff up your sleeves.

A nice thing to find when I log onto my computer in the morning! I'm loving this fic! Keep it coming!

that was soo good!

ME

Please hurry with the next chapter. I want to know what happens next.

Oh, so that's why the great Eo was speechless in his fight with Max. He hm... had lost his focus on the discussion... Great stuff. But I especially liked the ending, i.e. the Max being female part and the way Logan finds excuses for not going after her himself. Come on, he must have noticed she ran away half naked? Lol. I would rather have had Logan than Bling catch up wth her. After all, Logan had it coming while Bling is innocent. Grin. looking forward to some more.

I LOVE IT ^______^

Jude once again you are great at painting a moment. I am enjoying this story so much. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.