THIS WAS FUCKING GOOD!

First I thought it was Piccolo-Gohan, then Goku-Gohan, finally Gohan-Goten... And was really surprised when it turned out it was Mirai Gohan and Trunks (I guess I could call them that).

VERY NICE!

Wow.. this is definitly going in as one of my favorites.

Oh, wow... this one was very very good. This is another relationship that has so much scope for exploration. Very nicely done.

i love ur stories!there alwasy well writen

woo! this is good! at first i thought it was Goku talking about Gohan or Gohan talking about Goten, but it didn't make much sense in either of those scenarios...i give it a wOOt wOOt and two thubs up! hehehe... .

good. at 1st i thought it would be goten and i was thinking that goten would be innocent no matter wat... : P. but it's trunks. i dont really kno much bout him : P

Another great work. I don't wanna give anything away for those reading the reviews but ...Wow. good.

Such a lovely story - I'm assuming this is through the Mirai timeline? Either way, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

It was a good fic, you should keep on writting. Just please, make it longer next time.

That was really good! At first I thought that it was Goten that Gohan was looking at, but this made more sense.

Ya know? I thought that kid was Goten! Great fic! _

AAAAAH! I'm so FRUSTRATED at you! You got me thinking it was GOKU, you smart cookie you, I'd forgotten all about your twists... ::shakes head and smiles:: Once again I must say EXCELLENT JOB - do you really just SIT there and write these things? I have to get inspired - and my muse usually attacks me during sixth hour when I need to pay attention in class. :P At any rate, this is sooooo good!

nice! oh I loved it. such a cute twist at the end. I loved it even if it was made out of bordom. even if some of the greatest stuff comes out from that kind of stuff. Keep on a writtin' this was such a good piece of writing.

C ya

Silvertress