up-date please please please! Or at least tell me if you are going to continue PLEASE!

plz keep writing this is soo good

This is a really cool story. I like it.

SQE! I LOVE IT SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH! OMG THAT'S GREAT! I ALWAYS WONDERED HOW GEORGE BECAME A THIEF BECAUSE HIS MOTHER WAS SO RESPECTABLE, AND HOW KYPRIOTH OWED GEORGE, AND YOU ANSWERED ALL OF THAT! YOUR STORY IS SO GREAT! I LOVE THE ENDING!

OMG that was great. very creative too. I loved it. I hope the story will continue. if not its a good ending to start secual. Hope to see more soon. Love the story
Kitty

ok, i know i already reviewed but i forgot to add something. georges surname, cooper, is based on an occupation. im not sure what a cooper is (my dad says they possibly make barrels) but whatever it is its not a locksmith. in medeval times people's last names reflected their occupations. i know i explained that horribly but i think u get my drift. his father would either have had a different last name or a different occupation.

i thought it was great! (tho george seemed a bit out of character but its really hard to keep the peoples in character so still good!) im glad it was a/g cuz everyone writes a/js DESPITE THE FACT THAT ALANNA MARRIED GEORGE AND HAD THREE KIDS WITH HIM AND THE GREAT AND POWERFUL ALL KNOWING TAMMY SAID ON HER WEBSITE THAT GEORGE AND ALANNA LOVE EACH OTHER AND ETC. AND SHE KNOWS BEST CUZ SHES THE AUTHOR AND CREATED THESE PEOPLE! gr... anyhow, loved ur story

thank you for writing this! we reeally need some more AG, do you hear that people? too much AJ. *puke* anyway, it's great, hope you update soon.

Wow, *.* sorry I haven't been able to see this.

this is so god!

Aww Really good story! George's story was soo sad! omg! I really like your story! Usually I'm not into Alanna stories because I think that there's really nothing left to tell but you proved me wrong! Definaely keep writing!

its good! its really good!

you're not gonna just let george's father off like that after he'd almost kill george are you? better not!

keep writing for my hearts content!

CaZ!

update! this is really really good...

Good jobbie!

Format thingy: Try to make a new paragraph each time someone speaks like in this chappie. But the format in this chapter are less confusing... so you get : A plus!

i loved it...um...update...NOW! sounds good to me anywho... .;;