That was all very touching and so deep. It surprised me, but I love the straight-fowardness and briefness in which this was written. It just seemed more effective that way.

Awesome job; I was moved.

You know I read this story before and reading it again I can't believe I didn't review this because I almost always R/R. Anyway I liked this story because it was coming from a very different viewpoint showing Storm in a different light altogether. I loved the "Stupid girl" line and especially loved "Mystique must have looked at Jean a little too hard, because the red-head fainted dead away." That was LOL funny!

What I didn't like was Logan's sheer stupidity and Sabe's horrid actions but of course it wouldn't have been as good or legitimate w/out that but that might've been why I didn't review. Overall I really did enjoy the unique viewpoint very much.

oh wow. Man, this is good.

A very good story!;) I loved how you captured Ororo's feelings and thoughts, and it was very well-written and...aw, shoot, I loved the whole thing! I hope to see more from you soon.;-)

This was amazing... and it was only your first fic! WAY TO GO! It was something that i didn't expect! i can't wait for more from you and if this is truly you're first fic, then we can expect nothing but greatness.

This fic was deep. It was emotional. It was hurtful. It was great. This fic just took me on a whole other level. Great job again, can't wait to read more fics from you.