Oh my. Never has any piece of poetry brought me to tears until now. Those last two lines really got to me. You captured the way she must've felt when those years passed by her in a heartbeat, when she was finally reminded of the stingof mortal life.

Anyway, enough of my rambling, beautiful poem. Please, for the love of Eru, keep writing.

~AF

I cannot believe I didn't review this before.

A lovely, beautful, heartbreaking piece. The last two lines have been haunting me for awhile. Nicely done.

Omigosh, I'm in tears! This is absolutely stunningly beautiful.

Oh my god! *TEAR DROPS!* that is sooooooooooo sad! *eyes water some more!* oh! DAMN I LOVE THAT LOVE STORY!

BEAUTIFUL!

You captured Arwen's thoughts in that moment beautifully!