it really funny about Haku and the mop. Hope for more!

It's not short, it's no chapter at all that readers fear.

well i think it is taking u awhile to update. but please hurry and try to update. if u need help u can e-mail me lightdestiny80@yahoo.com

pretty good

Wow, you really took your time again. :)

What was it with the Magical Girl staff? ^_^' This chapter might have been a bit dull... Things go too easily and characters are somehow shallow. I don't know... -_-'

This good! Love it!! Haku so cute!! Just wanna give him a hug lol ^.^; Keep up the good work!!

Poor Poor Haku...LOL continue,

hello can you write another chapter

good story so far...keep up with the good work!
Ja ne!

Cool new chapter! I like it! Ceratinly does explain why Hanako couldn't leave. Hm... mysterious glowing stone... Hope there's more to come!

The stone.. hehehe

Very cool and mysterious

YAY you updated :D make the chapters longer! and update soon! Or I'll kidnap your kitty >3

very interesting, make chihiro sound less like a girly person please! i like the plot try not to make hanako the star and i thought haku loved chihiro ne? maek it show.

hey dats not fair ending it like dis u should continue updating more