Take a look at this tiny place. . . to the heart seeking freedom, this island is a prison surrounded by water. And so, this boy sought aa way to escape from his prison . . .
. . . and he opened his heart to darkness.
Amazing incorperation skills I have to say. you always leave me wanting more. Its a skill to know exactly when to leave off. Cant wait for the next installment!
Anigo ^_~

your portrayal of riku is so pathetic and weak that it can't even be remotely compared to his actual character. all he does in this fic is blubber, cry, and whine instead of what the original self assertive, confident, strong, and arrogant riku does. i understand he has been through a lot, but his character has digressed so completely as to not be recognizable. he went through a great deal in the games but still his strength shone through even when he felt alone. sora is a light to him and i don't feel that here. where as in the original story they thrived in competition causing them to remain strong so as to better themselves, riku seems to have given up entirely. i sense their relationship here is completely destrucive and devoid of any love.

that aside the writing is well done

whoa whoa, so then since Kairi remembers Sora telling Yami all about the monster INC world...then does Kairi remember when Riku and Yami sexed it up O.o ...that is so twisted...you probably made some Kairi/Riku fangirls squeal with delight over that one...

Ah I want to read the next chapter So. BAD! But its 6:30 A.M & I need to go to bed T_T

Aww this one was cute...yet angsty..

This chapter makes me sad T_T

Aww the ending scene was pretty cute. I realy wanna read the next part but I was thinking bout going to sleep..

Its 6:35 A.M XDD

But since you said the next part has yummy bits in it (XD) now I want to read it, since you already tempted me! x3

:O OH MY GOSH! POOR SORA! -cries- thats so sad...stupid stupid Riku...

Damn, Riku gets the keyblade in the beginning, is the good guy, and STILL get's kidnapped by Xehanort. Do some things never change? Kairi where is your purifying power when he need it.

Oh and this clears up the whole 'so who REALLY molested Riku, Kairi, or Heartless-who-I-don't-know-too-well-anymore?' question.

The end sorta confuses me..but I still likes it!

How did Mushu get there? XD He's staying in Sora's hood just like Jiminy Cricket!

That really long line of jumbled words..it says be careful he is coming doesnt it? just the bold words...

...And I dont exactly get the Yami dude...But im just stupid so...xD

Sora-Sexual? XD Creative and Weird!

Cuutte xD

Woo!! The first world they go to is Mulan!!

short chapter...but it was good nonetheless :]