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Reviews for: The Next Generation: Beginning of the Raspberries
True
2003-11-16 . chapter 5
Yeah, Go Gwennie! ^_^ Whoo-hoo! *waves Raspberry flag* Hahaha, stupid Slytherin **. That was really funny about teh ReBuF name brand thing...
alicerulestheworld
2003-06-22 . chapter 4
Hey Trishers, I finally reviewed, at last! (Told you I would...)
It's great, I love it, specially **!Laura and Mari and Anna... I know theres absolutely NO chance that you'll let Laura win, coz the good guys always have to(damn canon) and onviously Laura n Mari n Anna are the bad guys... But please, pretty pretty please with sugra and sprinkles and a glace cherry on top can they win the bet?
Okay, I'm done, but write more soon, y'hear? I wanna know what happens... I think I know Janine's char a bit more now too.
Ciao!
~Alexx
a.k.a Lissi
a.k.a Laura and Janine and Alex and Colette
TrueFan
2003-06-19 . chapter 4
Aw, not much Gwenniness, but still good! ^_^ Lol.

Sorry, I gotta go. I have to go have a shower and hop in bed before my mom comes on her ten oclock rampage. O_o

~Luv True

P.S.: MORE! hheheh. I'm sure you got that, though. ^_~
Malting
2003-06-14 . chapter 3
D'oh, no Anna! I feel deprived. She gets to be a ** later, I trust?
Cool chapter, though. Can't review more cause of homework, but cool.
TrueFan
2003-06-03 . chapter 3
yay! Gwennyness!

I really liked all the Gwen attention! I've can't write that long of a review, though, because i have alot to R/R, and about half an hour to do it in!

~luv True
TrueFan
2003-02-03 . chapter 1
What?!? No instructions?!? how am i EVER going to figure out how to review?!? *places hand on forehead and faints dramatically* ....*gets up brightly* Anywho, that was interesting. *points at story* Wow, there's even a story, arn't you efficient! Soo....many....children!!! (although, i shouldn't talk. I just realized i have -13- main characters in my story right now. -_-) Hmmmm......MOre!!!!!

~*~TrueFanakaCaitlinTruu~*~

Do i have to put Griffindor? OR do you already know it....oh well.
Delia and Salem. Ravenclaw/Griffindor, aka Aniron Sauron Greenleaf-Took
2003-01-25 . chapter 1
Great job Trish! Keep it up!
Anna
2003-01-24 . chapter 1
Hiya!! See, I *am* reviewing.
Pretty good, pretty interesting...
*Smirks* so, when is my lot coming in? What's a HP story without it's attendant Slytherins, after all?
And while I have to say I don't really like Harry/Hannah, I guess it's better than a lot of things. I don't think you really want to know who I think he should be stuck with.
Oh, and will the players of all the fourth-years be able to have any say on what their characters do, or are you just going to go on profiles and general posts?
Oh yes, two things. One - I can't understand half the chatspeak, dammit. Grrr. And two - you need an i in Diagon Alley - second paragraph of Daphne POV, eighth line. There's probably more mistakes, but I can see it right next to the review window, and it's bugging me, dammit. Okay, so I can be anal retentive sometimes. Sorry...
alicerulestheworld
2003-01-24 . chapter 1
Hola Tricia!
Well I like the whole beginning thing, I believe everyone has already told you that, haven't they? What was the Mysterious Unknown Thing between Harry and Hannah? I wants to know! And how many chapters will this end out to be? Sorry 'bout all the questions, I'm just inquisitive.

'Tis good, anyway, muchly good! Oh, one more question, sorry: Are you going to be focusing on just the Raspberries? Hmm, well, I loved it, keep writing,

~Lissi:)
a.k.a. Laura/Colette/Alex
arressayy
2002-12-18 . chapter 1
Oooh...me like muchly! Keep up the magnificent work! ^^

RSA
Mel
2002-11-11 . chapter 1
Loff it, Treeshdear!
Snorkle5444
2002-11-11 . chapter 1
Wow! This is great!!^_^ I look forward to more and more!! Poor Hermione!!^_~
--Snorkle5444

2002-11-04 . chapter 1
I told you I wouldn't just kiss up, but I really like it. It does what I think a good prologue should do...get the reader into the story a little in a way that makes you want to read more. You do a good job of introducing your characters--I get a sense of each girl's personality already.

I also like the info about what the trio has been doing in the years since they graduated. The Harry/Hannah pairing is one I haven't seen before, but I like it...maybe because it is a little unexpected.

Anyway, I can see a good story in the making here!
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