max and liz forever!

max&liz forever!

It has heaps of potential, but you told, you didn't show. The ending line is far too blunt. Maybe you should write more of an ending? Otherwise, it has a lot of potential! Lots of it :)

I love it, especially the way that they both really wanted the same thing, and ended up telling each other by a little flirting. It's great!

There isn't enough detail. I mean, at the very end, it's just like summarized!

Don't take this offensively, but it was kind of boring...the beginning was good,

but it seems like u were in a hurry at the end.

good story but too short, you should write a sequel about their date.

I think it's absolutely fabulous. It doesn't get much better than a simple, sweet romance. Brava, well done!

Snort. that was cute :)

Hello! I really enjoyed your fan fic, and it's weird too because I usually don't like M/L fan fics! I'm a total M/M shipper. Anyway, keep up the awesome writing. Thank you for reviewing one of my fan fics, 'A Change From Jealousy.' I posted part of the sequel to it today, and another fan fic I wrote, if you would like to check them out. Again, I liked your fan fic!