Sweet...I'm not fond of genderbending, but I say you made a pretty good job of this. Never thought of Lance as being a girl though, makes a change.

Interesting you could have had Lance tell Ash the man,s staring was nasty or just rude without going into the subject of Sex Ed like telling a girl that a woman, staring at bare chested men is sometimes considered rude.

Interesting you could have had Lance tell Ash the man,s staring was nasty or just rude without going into the subject of Sex Ed like telling a girl that a woman, staring at bare chested men is sometimes considered rude.

*Melts* Poor Lance...

Ok. This might be interesting.

Didn't his weedle evolve?

Finally finished this... took me long enough.

This was really sad but sweet... That explains a lot about your first two stories, I guess. Great job! I also want to comment on how much this story makes me feel I'm reading the comics... And there aren't even pictures! Congrats on that.

I guess I'm off to Dragon's Mastery, right? See ya there!

-Samantha McPhoenix, Pokemon League Grand Master (aka Pichu*Star)

*nodnod* Great ending... *doesn't really understand much of all this stuff with the different people and all but whatever...* ;;

*looks at the clock* ...It's that late already? Sheesh, I need to read quicker if I want to play Sapphire today yet... X.x

*is intrigued* *wonders if she could get the pokemon manga somewhere around where she lives* ...probably not. *sigh*

Still lurve the fic. .

Well, not much else to comment right now... *continues reading*

*smirks at the last sentence in this chapter* You really have good imagination, to have a different one in every chapter...

I'm not reviewing very much, am I? Sorry. X.x Want to get back to playing Sapphire, which was just published at the beginning of this week around here... That's pretty late don't you think? Well anyway, it's still a magnificecnt fic, definitely worth the time I spend on it.

*still would prefer a shonen-ai version of this* ;;

Such a great fic... I never knew there were so good writers in the pokemon section, it _is_ after all, filled with...lets say more naive persons (not to say that my personal favorite Yugioh wouldn't have gotten pretty crammed with that type lately...). But hey, isn't any section that is pretty popular. At least on FF. X.x

*goes to read more of this*

Very interesting ending.

WA! That was so sad. They had to part. At least Red I mean Ash was reverted back to his formal self. So he's really Hope this time not Destiny interesting. So they destroyed the old world and created a new one that full of peace and love huh? Interesting. So that's what the recarnation part comes from, from the other two stories huh? And why Lance had Ash's orb thing. Me like this was really, really good and so sweet. I'm starting to support championshippy alot if Lance was a girl like you put her into here. I can't wait for Dragon's Mastery to be posted! Make it multichaptered please! I get to enjoy Ash and Lance together alot longer!

Great new chapter. This was a truly excellent fic. I can't wait to see Dragon Mastery. Keep up the great work.

wow, very good. i didnt see it coming