I have really enjoyed this piece and believe that it is a really great story. That being said, I hope that you will consider finishing it. I know life continues but please consider!

Here's to hoping you'll update soon. It's a pity such a great story does not have an end. I liked it a lot and am looking forward to the next update. Or is the story abandonned?

Sorry for the misfortune you've experienced. Update soon please. Peaceful endings.

Hakan Kurohi

I love this story and want to see Qui-Gon escape. I would also love to read a completed story.

oh come on i was reading this

Ouch, real life really did a number on you. I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens after this point when you get a chance to update. All I can say is, More, more, more, pretty please. You're a skilled writer and your characters are very engaging and interesting. I'm setting this story for reminders, and adding the chapters so far to an ebook marked WIP in progress so I can reread what's here away from the computer. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

This fic is very absorbing. I love all of the twists, turns, and complications your characters seem to get into. I can't wait to see everyone's various plans in action!

But alas, it is already February 2009, and I see that RL has prevented any updates. If there is anything I can do to help speed up the process (including beta work!) please let me know!

Thank you for a thrilling read! _

and it was getting so good too.

Hey, whatever you need to do. Just please let us know if you plan on taking this story up again.

(Also, I'd recommend you take down the "update" chapters when you do-I'm surprised FFN hasn't either deleted them or gotten on your case about it... they haven't, have they?

...anyway.

Hoping for more when you're able. I've been following this story for some time now, and it's excellent.

I love this story. Obi-wan taking Padme and Anakin as padawans on Naboo is awesome and now we're on Coruscant with the Jedi Convocation. I can't wait to see the fallout with rescuing Qui-Gon, Obi-wan's jedi faction, what's going to happen with Palpatine and Sifu-Dias(sp?), no to mention Anakin and Padme's bond and reuniting Qui-Gon and Obi-wan. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

I'm sorry to hear about all the problems in your life, but thrilled that you haven't given up on this story. Let there be more chapters. Hopefully soon. _

All honsty, title isent great and summery is like mud, however beneath that mud is a gem of a story that shines like the moon serusly you may not be the best at summryers but your story is mind blowing! pls update soon.

It sounds like you have been hit by some of the rocks of Real Life. I have experienced trouble on the job, caused by someone else, and fibromyalgia second hand-the mother of a good friend of mine, who cares for a son with cerebral palsy, has it and I have helped when I could-and I am now recovering at home three weeks after a two week stay in the hospital.

I am glad that you have continued your story after such a long time between its beginning ang the present. Even if you only produce a new chapter months apart, that's all it would take to continue your story. Please don't decide that its been too long and let it go. Unfortunately too many other FFN Authors do just that.

-Lilith Kayden

I have come up to Chapter 10 of your story. I am glad that you hav e decided to continue it after quite some time. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters written thus far.

-Lilith Kayden

Wow, I'm sorry. It sounds like you've had a rough month. Take your time with the story and recoop.