Your so mean! You made a cliffhanger! The next chapter better be better than this one for you to make a cliffhanger!

Good story.I think you should !

Adorable. True for their age of innocence. Honest and sweet. One of the most excetional written one-shot fics I've read. Change anything? Well, nothing in the story. Format could use some work, as in paragraphing and indentations. That's pretty much it. Well written overall. _ Please keep writing Takumi stories. There needs to be more Takumi supporters.
Impressed,
Aurore

please continue with the story !i enjoy it and thought it was very good!so hurry up with the next chapter ok!

HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Great story PLEASE write the next chapter ur story is so good!TAKUMI FOREVER!

this is one great story

you have but losen up on the

fighting and trust me you'll

thank me!

SEE YA!

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please continue! this is a great story! TAKUMI FOREVER!

Woo.I read this a long time ago,but I never got the chance to now I am!Yay?Anyhoo,I loved this ficcy! So kawaii!Heh,when I first saw it,I even printed it out.*now has it in her school binder* It was a bit difficult to read without a seperate paragraph when each character other than that,it was all good! ) Great job!

Karoru

Aww! Super kawaii! I myself am more of a JunpeixIzumi fan, but I know this wasn't a romance anyway. Really cute!

ya i kno i reviewed already, but this is extremely good! i even saved it in my favorites :) please provide everyone with a sequel or another tazumi :)

very,very good! a sequel seems like the best thing to do with this tale...

*lol* Hilarious. o