Interesting... 'Thoughts'... seems like a very good title. Oh... and it's not that confusing. I understand the story perfectly. Hope to see future fics by you soon! :P

o.o; Wow. Very interesting. "Thoughts" is actually a good title for this. Reminds me of the kind of patterns that float through my head on rainy days when I'm home alone.. Very well done. Makes me want to read the manga. Do you have any idea when or where I could get my hands on them? Good luck on future fics. :D

Interesting fanfiction. I enjoyed it. Don't worry about it being confusing, because it isn't. Keep up the good work!

Do not let anyone tell you this is confusing. I understood perfectly. Your talent shows in this fic, it really does.
Constantly, I am told that my organization in stories is wonky(unlevel), but I am used to writing poetry (think Emily Dickenson.) My goal is to perplex the reader, so they do not understand. So they only grasp pieces of the puzzle and it leaves them wanting more.

Whoa. I don't know if it was just me, but I LOVED that. o.o;; Your descriptions were thoughtful, and the speech limited, which I personally enjoy. I'm not usually Azalie/Orphen, but this made the pair exceptional. Please keep writing for Orphen, this is a great fic. Nice work! ::nod.::

~ Sammi