Hey, if I paid you, would you write the angsty and dramatic parts of my fics for me?
Damn you write good. It was really interesting to read a fic where Youji didn't want or give in to sex, especially to the one that he loves.

...damn. ** damn. o_o uhm, sorry for the language. but bloody hell. this was *argh* good. ...y'know what, my contacts were getting so dry i was going to take them out but now i'm just -that- close to actually crying. and its all your fault. i'm going to read every one of you weiss fics... *slaps self to keep from bawling* that last line was just the proverbial shot thru the heart... *sigh* i loved the fic. thanks.

*wails inconsolably* NO. YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS. I'M TOO EMOTIONALLY VULNERABLE TO ACCEPT SUCH AN ENDING.

And with all that said: I love your fic.

DRAMATIC!

WOW!

Wow! *claps* This fic was amazing! Kudos to you! I really enjoyed the way you made short thoughts from Aya and Yohji paint a picture of what was really going on and what had happened before as well as what might happen in the future. Great job and keep up the brilliant work!

-Louie
Vice President of the AYYA resistance

Hey. What an interesting story. What I liked about it is how you turned everything around at the end, and Aya began to care. Very cool ^^

This is unquestionably the BEST AyaxYohji fic I have ever read. You keep both characters fully IC, develop a little backstory, have good voice for both of them, and have serious character change... in an incredible, concise, mind-blazing package. I am thoroughly impressed.

that's sooo sweet!!!
Pleaaaasseeeee, write a sequel to this! Please!

god, if this is what you call pwp, i'd hate to see you write something with a real plot! you are the master! I bow down! this is great! you're a really good writer. but just a tip: it helps to save the "**" for when you really need them.

very good and very full of emotion i love it

Wow, that was really good. not only did you make that format completely work for your story, but it was the right sort of ending. It ALMOST makes me want to read your r/k fics....but I won't. Sorry. I'm afraid of r/k, so much of it out there is so goddamn sappy and fluffy.
My dislike of sap and fluff may explain my liking for this neh? Plus I'm just an a/y y/a **....
^_^ story doesn't need a sequel, so its good your not writing em, but you should write another a/y!!! especially since you were so mean this time around!
Good luck on finals.