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bluestargem
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
Wow.
I LOVE this. Very original.
Wow.
The One And Only Lobster
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Very interesting. :) Though a bit OoC, I think, somehow. Can't exactly put my finger on it.
bredalot
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
Brilliant. Words have power, in their own right, and they are precise and important and perfect, and you captured that exactly. I love the precision you used in selecting words for this piece: when it's about words, you can't be casual with the words you choose, and you weren't. I also love the idea that this, this is what draws Voldemort, and frankly, I wouldn't be surprised at all.
q.thews
2006-08-18 . chapter 1
You know... this pov could be... the easy one, Riddle's (but i don't know if with his childhood he got the time to learn/appreciate pronunciation) or Malfoy's (he could have been raised and educated at liking right pronunciation) or even Snape (in his pursue of knoledge and subtleness) or even Bellatrix (before completly losing her mind in the darkness of evil).
Intriguing.
Bye
Ariana Malfoy- Lestrange
2006-06-09 . chapter 1
I was going through my favorites list, and I realized I never left a review.

It sent a chill up my spine. You captured him perfectly- in a way that I haven't seen him ever captured. Really, how do you do it?
hello heartbreak
2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Very plausible, and wonderful characterization. Adding to favorites!
imperius unforgivable
2005-05-09 . chapter 1
Brilliant. :D
the green fluff
2005-03-05 . chapter 1
Beautiful story.
I was saying the words ("Imperio! Imperio!") to myself while reading, and was stared at oddly by household members. :D
A very interesting look at Tom Riddle.
-puts this story on favourites-
Lira-chan
2004-01-05 . chapter 1
Aya... This, I love, in a twisted sort of way. You're the one in love with the english language, only in your ficlet, it's Tom Riddle who is in love with words and their aesthetics. I just love the idea that, originally, he wasn't some cruel sadistic fiend... Just a kid learning spells and loving the way words flowed. In addition to that- I like the way you ended it.
"They weren’t evil. They were strong and good. Beautiful, even.
And he liked the sound of them."
Hee. I hadn't pulled my strange little quoting habit on you before, because your ficlets are short, sweet, and to the point. Oh, some of it's longer... But you're getting the idea that I'm just a tad lazy, aren't you? Wouldn't be able to go for quite that much HP ficcage. But this... Loving the flow, loving the idea, and it's Tom Riddle. What -fun.-
~*Lira-chan*~
Aidenfire
2003-09-03 . chapter 1
O, how creepy! But that's not saying I didn't like it... I found this story from your sig on FA, BTW.
Tar Irene
2003-07-24 . chapter 1
wow.. that is beautiful. a beautiful study of his mind, and the curses themselves. mm..
Liebling
2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Creepy indeed. It makes a lot of sense, for evil to begin just with how a word sounds. Brilliant fic.
Crystalite 104
2003-03-28 . chapter 1
WELL. That's a way to think of it I hadn't heard of. He liked saying them. Saying them! Actually looked to me like he also enjoyed inflcting them, but still, a interesting idea. And I like the title, too. "Vocabulary Lesson." Very cool.
She's a Star
2003-03-22 . chapter 1
Oh. *shivers* Very good - a wonderful take on Tom Riddle's childhood. This was such a fascinating idea, and you wrote it so well... There was such an elegant sort of denial throughout the whole thing.

Wonderful. :-)

~*Star
liquid mercury
2003-03-15 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Simply beautiful, dark and compelling. You can feel the curiously almost innocence in Tom Riddle's thoughts, like a little lost child wondering where 'mummy' had gone. Very in-character and there's a sort of... depth to it. I enjoyed reading it.
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