 Pickels 2004-04-23 . chapter 1The funny thing is I understood the first part |
 Donna Irene Mohr 2004-01-06 . chapter 1hmm i think u spelled a few words wrong lol that was funny
ps there aint no shame im reading H/P fanfics stand up and be proud of who u really are(a hopeless harry potter fan just like me) |
 psycho tabby cat 2003-11-05 . chapter 1Hahahaha!
I think this little fic makes a very good point. The feeling of relief that I got when everything started to be written properly really sort of makes you realise how hard it was to read before ( had to concentate hard not to say b4 :P)
(I spell hopelessly, but as I don't write, it doesn't really effect other people, well not like it would you were writing a story)* trying very hard not too make grammer mistakes in review* *g*
Thanks for the clever little fic.
D |
 cyberfrogX 2003-08-05 . chapter 1interesting, humorous |
 allison lightning 2003-06-25 . chapter 1okay |
 not done baking 2003-03-24 . chapter 1This was great...nor this was fantastic... there really aren't any words to describe how much I liked this! |
 Colonel Ketchup 2003-03-20 . chapter 1one day harry poter wuz sittng on a bench by da laik. hurmyownie sawed him so she walkd ovr 2 him. wat is rong harry she askd him. i am sad harry sed. y hurmyownie askd. bekuse ron is mad at me harry sed. y hurmyownie askd. i dunno harry sed. o sed hurmyownie well i hoap u r happy soon. thanks sed harry.
Wow, perfect 3 year old impression. LOL |
 FishOutOfWater 2003-03-03 . chapter 1I can't believe I actually laughed my ** off at this. LOL. |
 goobersprinkle 2003-01-18 . chapter 1har. |
 PinkFuzzyDuck 2002-12-04 . chapter 1 ???????????????????????????????????????????????????What the bloody hell was that!!!???I understand if you dont usually write Harry Potter fan fic but honestly! yours truely PinkFuzzyDuck |
 Rinky-Dinks 2002-11-22 . chapter 1Thank you! Finally, someone else who has an issue with stupid lazy people not trying on their work. I congratulate you and add this to my Favortie Stories list. |
 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 Thank you for your service, however small. I, too, am sick of reading stories (whatever their source material) which are ** both eyes and brain: atrocious spelling, grammar and punctuation; bizarre word usage (often including malapropism) which impedes comprehension; failure to realize that a change of speaker (or scene) usually requires a change of paragraph; etc. And the pity -- as well as the irony -- is that plotwise, some of these stories are actually worthwhile! That you've performed your service with such a sense of humor is also commendable. Well done, but what's with "Beasta" and "Blasta"? |
 All Mighty Terrestrial 2002-11-05 . chapter 1Some of us actually DO try our best... But that was funny. I know which stories you mean, in that nice block text that's unreadable. |
 kat 2002-11-05 . chapter 1 lol!!!! i love it...i have serious issues with people who have bad grammar...
love the fic...hilarious!!
-kat |
 rinaaa 2002-11-05 . chapter 1*snorts* omg, that is so totally making fun of them, but...HA!!! LOL, I never woulda thought of doing that! |