This story was good, yes please do a sequal.

hey it's peppers. i just read this story and it's really good. i like how you put Snape's and Domenica's attitudes about their chilred. unforchanately i haven't got a chance to read any of your other work except at the moment i'm reading Shadow of a Soul. i haven't had alot of time to read lately. keep on writing and updating! and if u would like post a link to your stories in Slytherin_manor.

Peppers Monroe

That was sad.. so sad. You made mee cry. I'm glad Sevie isn't the harsh anymore. I would like to see a sequel. Laters.

I enjoyed the story quite a bit and I actually have no suggestions to submit except to keep writing more :) The story was very intreguing and it held my attention completely, I simply couldn't tear myself away until I had finished reading it :D

*sniff* Dory's bitter end. Poor Severus, poor Remus...poor everyone who loved her.

Great fic! Sad, but great!

This story was absolutly beautiful. I couldn't help but cry when Domenica died. You did a wonderful job with this but i don't think you should write a sequel. I think that this ends right where it should and anything more would be overkill. But once again, this was an amazing story, good job.

Excellent job with the conclusion, especially with the memorial. Even though I would have loved to see a sequal to this with the children, you have given the story the perfect ending.

I hope you don't mind, I will be adding a link to your story in the A/N of the next chapter that I post on Sunday.

I look forward to seeing more stories from you in the future.

Sincerely

Demonic Angel (brighteyes632210)

Great story...Im glad you went with your tragic ending...:)

I enjoyed the work. I rewrote paragraph 3 just to contrast writing styles. I am going to put it here and then add a general critique. Thx for website/group.

nooo, evil voldie! This is very good so far, your writing has improved a lot since the first fics of yours ive read. I think the trasformation of Dominica is very interesting. Good job!

That was so sad. write more soon. Okay? Laters.

TRES BEIN! Give me MORE! :)

Totally AWESOME story so far...I was quite shocked with how you changed your outcome, but it is GREAT! I look foward to reading more :)

Dude that was good. You'll be writing more to this, right? 'Cause, if you don't, I'll be forced to kill you. Laters.

I'm glad you got the inspiration to write a "what-if" story for Dory and Severus. Great work so far and remember _ Sevey's got feelings too ;-)