i'm going to have to agree that the format was confusing, but it was an all around good fic. Kinda kawaii. _

A good fic...though it could have used some better spacing...and the chars talking gets a little confusing every now and then, but hey you took a good song and wrote a good fic around it Kudos

No WAY! Dang it! I was sure you hadn't written one with the Lifehouse song... Well, its pretty good Alan. o-o

This made me smile. Its cute. The format is a little confusing, but I like it all the same. Go Alan! (dear hyne i sound like a cheerleader...)

EEEEEEEEEEeeeeee! I LOVE it. Kind of reminds me of how my fiance said he was thinking and feeling before he ever asked me out in the first place.

Very very cool

Very Cool ;)