eh. This had potential until the Mary Sue due started breathing.

Kill them off, and it'll be good. Mary Sues are a sign of bad writing, and authors that use them really shouldn't be writing.

Hey solar.. I would review one of your newer ones.. but I'm having to catch up on your stories =P. This is Zhin by the way.. o.O if you want.. you can e-mail meh sometime.. milenko89@hotmail.com and.. yeah.. I've missed you =P
Also.. kick ** story so far.

I don't know what I don't like about your story, but I just don't like it. You could improve. Anyway, pretty good story!

Ahh. Happy ending.

Gr.Damn FF been crap these days. OH SOLAR! Great ending I bet now your going to concentrate on Our Future lies Withen and uh.the Escaflowne Story! Your a really good writer so keep it up palio!

your welcome it was the best

YAY! IT'Z FINALLY FINISHED! kkz.calm.calm.i'll take a chill pill.
anywayz, this was a great story!! i just couldn't wait for da next chapter!! well.hope u write a sequal to this!!
==CherryBlossom==

Hey Solar great story! I wish I could see when they merged together. But blah blah you know wish I had the show. But anywho great story! Oh yeah and maybe for the end they could all go on vacation with their lovers. You know catch up? Just a thought! Great story!!

"Prodigious!"

Cool.
Update soon!

yay! another chapter!! i luv this chappie! update soon! i CANT WAIT FOR DA LAST CHAPTER!

luvza lotz
==CherryBlossom==

Pretty good.Although when the tamers were unconcious, you didn't mention they woke up to help give their crests to Takato. What were the Tamer's crests? Henrika and Jeraot all the way! Keep writing and put out that last chapter soon!

How about for the ending, when the others get back to the DD world, VenommaloMyostismon attacks and TAKATO DIES!




Don't get me wrong, I LOVE TAKATO!
so don't hate me for that.

GOOD STORY!

I can't believe you stole Takato from Digimon Tamers! I absolutely hate your story and wouldn't bother going on. I'm not insulting your creativity, it's great, but seriously, I don't think Takato should be taken away.

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