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| Crimson Kaoru 2006-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse(I'm too lazy to log in) Hey, this was great. So was the other version, and in fact, I think I preferred it. But now to the point. Would you mind if I... uh... "borrowed" the 'Sesshoumaru didn't hate humans. He liked them well enough to know how easily they break and die - knew them well enough to stay away from them' line? Of course, I would twist it to make it my own, don't worry. It's just so inspiring! PM with your answer, or... uh... not. ^_^ ~Crimson Kaoru |
| xwishful-thinkingx 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abusethis was an interesting story well keep on writing! |
| NeKuRa~SaMa 2006-03-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseBoth versions are excellent. So poignant. |
| Thoughts13 2006-02-15 ch 2, | abusewicked awsome, loved both endings |
| EternusLemures 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseHm...wow. That was strangley cool-ly informative of WHY in the nine hells he hates inuyasha. I actually liked this chapter. ~EL |
| Krysta 2004-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYOU. ARE. AN.AWESOME.WRITER. You have captured this and mad eit more than gorgeous! Wow. |
| Genevieve Cordula 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really great! That wasn't the way I thought their childhood was, but you made it so vividly convincing, that I wouldn't doubt if that's the way it was supposed to go! Fantastic descriptions, especially with Inuyasha's mother. I really liked it, keep up the great work. ^-^ |
| Grey Warrior198706 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThat coudn't have happened because Inuyasha knew his mother but otherwise it was a great story. Brought a tear to my eyes *sniff* |
| Umi no Yuki 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abusei like this. All of it seems possible and seems like it would fit in with the story line of the show. |
| Cataluna 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I thought it was a really good explaination. There's a conflict in the timing of Inuyasha's mother's death (she's didn't die till he was 7 or 8), but it's still a great story. It's rare to find fics that concerns their parents' past. |
| Claraious 2002-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! NO, SERIOUSLY! WOW! THIS IS REALLY GOOD! IT'S A VERY CREATIVE ONE-SHOT. MOST STORIES TO TRY AND REASON OF WHY SESSHOUMARU HATED INUYASHA WAS EITHER PREJUDICE OR 'CUZ HIS FATHER CHEATED ON HIS MOTHER AND STUFF LIKE THAT. THIS IS REALLY ORIGINAL AND I REALLY LIKE IT. ^o^ (i'm not good at praising people, but this is a VERY strong piece of work.) KEEP WRITING! |
| Hikaru-009 2002-11-05 ch 1, | abuseOooh!!That was good!I liked it! |
| Winter-Dragon 2002-11-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting fic! And quite different. I liked the way it flowed, and the ending was very unexpected. Excellent work here! |
| Hogulus, the One who Never ... 2002-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad! I like it. Nice explanation. |