And Holly didnt just heal Artemis because...?

Seriously. Dont give me any bullcrap about how she was out of magic. If his life was in danger, the whole fairy world would be sent to save him. He would not be allowed to just freakin die like that.

Powerful stuff! I mean, the way they were all happy and together, then sad. But Holly isn't the type to break into sobs. She's a proud and hard person (sometimes), I think she would at least adapt a cold exterior and leave. But that's just my opinion; good job! Although I was expecting femmslash sooo...oh well!

First off, they alow songfics now (obviously) so go ahead and add the lyrics back. Go ahead it won't hurt. It's nothing, just post the lyrics. Seriously, post the freaking lyrics. Joking. Anyways, this is a good fic, my only problem is that Juliet and Holly seemed a bit out of character and this was before TTP so I don't even know where the heck you got the idea of HollyArtemis. Not to mention she's 80 and he's...was it 13 when this book came out? Hm...

Anyway, besides my pet peeve of the unreasonable A/H relationship this was a good fic. You seem to be the first person in the archive who's playing with the idea of Artemis dieing.

_Weirdo

oh lord, I'm crying eyes out!

and I haven't cried in 3 years now

beautiful but so sad

I didn't think it was very slashy, which disappoints me mildly, but it was still awesome, which makes me happy ). Though, I doubt you care. Still: This is really well-thought out, really creative and altogether great.

interesting twist at the end of the story! Having Holly and Juliet thinking that they both love Artemis, but in the end not realising that their soulmates could be each other! And Artemis dies! Feels tempted to do hurray dance.

How did Arty get hurt? i'm confused.

It's just friendship between the two woman..Right ?

I liked this fic..But why did you KILL ARTEMIS ?

So...sad.. (Sobs) Excellent job!

i'll go for the friendsip thing as slash seriously scares me, and i wasn't scared. Nice one kitty, you comin on the forums anytime soon?

Why is it that most of your fics leave me depressed and hollow inside? I know that sounds bad, but its a good thing. It means you're good at writting angst!

This was so sad. Made me feel like lying on my bed and thinking for a few hours.

Oh well. Great writing.

Okay Holly/Juliet creeps me out. Can you word it so that it is only meaning friendship?*shudders*

NO! Artemis died! Great story!

*cries a bit*

That's so sad...

*smiles*

It's good though, very...

$DETERMINEDPerfectionist$

Hey, this was not bad! I didn't mind Artemis dying, I like sad, sad, stuff. And both Juliet and Holly liking him and having that discussion was pretty well written. I think though, by reading the third in the Artemis Fowl series, that there is a love triangle like this- Holly/Artemis/Juliet. Butler states that he thinks Artemis is rather fond of Juliet in the third book, so that just led me to believe that triangle. And Butler _is_ pretty perceptive, and usually right.. Who knows?