Reviews for Open Your Eyes

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AnimeFeline 2006-08-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseHow did Arty get hurt? i'm confused.
A Cup Of Earl Grey 2006-06-26 ch 1,	abuseIt's just friendship between the two woman..Right ? I liked this fic..But why did you KILL ARTEMIS ??!!`´
By Grace Alone 2006-05-10 ch 1,	abuseSo...sad.. (Sobs) Excellent job!
salrianna 2006-03-11 ch 1,	abusei'll go for the friendsip thing as slash seriously scares me, and i wasn't scared. Nice one kitty, you comin on the forums anytime soon?
Jamie Love 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseWhy is it that most of your fics leave me depressed and hollow inside? I know that sounds bad, but its a good thing. It means you're good at writting angst! This was so sad. Made me feel like lying on my bed and thinking for a few hours. Oh well. Great writing.
Aura of Chaos 2005-06-10 ch 1,	abuseOkay Holly/Juliet creeps me out. Can you word it so that it is only meaning friendship?shudders
Indecisive Mind 2005-04-26 ch 1,	abuseNO! Artemis died! Great story!
DETERMINEDPerfectionist 2004-07-10 ch 1,	abusecries a bit That's so sad... smiles It's good though, very... $DETERMINEDPerfectionist$
Saiouri17 2003-10-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, this was not bad! I didn't mind Artemis dying, I like sad, sad, stuff. And both Juliet and Holly liking him and having that discussion was pretty well written. I think though, by reading the third in the Artemis Fowl series, that there is a love triangle like this- Holly/Artemis/Juliet. Butler states that he thinks Artemis is rather fond of Juliet in the third book, so that just led me to believe that triangle. And Butler _is_ pretty perceptive, and usually right.. Who knows?
ArtemisFowlWorld 2003-08-04 ch 1,	abuseWay good, loved it... keep going...
MercuryRemedy 2003-05-20 ch 1,	abuseGood job. The ending was sad- I hadn't expected that! You might want to work on your opening paragraph however- the first sentence didn't really grab me or pull me into the story. And I was a little confused with Butler and Artemis, because I thought that Artemis had a broken arm and then Holly and Juliet were acting very sad and hopeless. Other then that I thought it was a rather good story. The reactions of Holly and Juliet were very realistic. The dialogue could have used a little work, but other then that- good job!
ophelia who is insane 2003-04-02 ch 1,	abusesqueals That was a rarity for me, I never squeal. Consider yourself lucky. I like it, another rarity, because I’m not really into the whole A/H or A/J or even H/J if you know what I mean. Really good characterisation though. It was SO sad! I don’t really like it when Artemis dies, it makes me feel depressed that people are willing to kill him off. Liz (or Blue Yeti, depending which name you use) told me that you were feeling unappreciated and ignored at the moment, but don’t worry because so am I. At least your work has some substance…… I have what looks suspiciously like a Mary-Sue (as Liz was so kind to point out to me) and everyone is ignoring me but at least they have a reason. I really like your work. Truly. I like short Fics because I can get through them quickly and then review then without being overwhelmed. Oh well that’s all for now, please write something else that I may sink my teeth into, and don’t forget that there are people out there in the abyss who like your style. Magna ** laude, Ophelia
Spectra16 2003-03-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was good. How did Artemis end up there? Oh! I have a good idea! He gets in a car accident because a giant, plastic, donut roles his car over! Or maybe he's in Paris and he falls asleep on the Eiffel Tower because of a sleeping disorder from an earlier attack from a mountain lion! He survives the mountain lion with 3 toes and 2 fingers. Kinda like daddy. Perfect! Gotta add that to my Top 100 Ways To Die! Oh, sorry.
Eloise Moonbright 2003-03-01 ch 1,	abuseOh. Poor everyone! I reallyy liked this but I have one mnor problem. Would the nurse really not say anything about Holly? I mean she is a fairy. Anyways this was really kewl. ~Yukina~
Thundermage 2003-02-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is good. Confusing at points, but good. To Blue Yeti's review: You have me completely and thouroughly(probably spelled wrong) confused by the second paragraph in your review. To ArTeMiSfOwL: Get off your lazy ** and help me find the Snapple Thief and lay off Kitty for being a fluffy romance fanatic! ARRGGHH! MY SNAPPLE! NO! To Big Friendly Walrus: You sound funny. Do you have an AIM s/n? Tell me by e-mailing me at thunder_mage3@yahoo.com . And, who the Hell are you! I keep hearing about you all over the place! And Brian Jacques is cool! Im done with my pointless ranting now. Off to find the Snapple Thief!

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