Wow! How coolis that? Did a mortal human write that? I am in awe of your talents. Do you also like Artemis Fowl? You should read my coll story! But back to the subject, such a cool story/poem. I loved it please write more!

This is adorable! Very well-written, as usual, of course. Really sweet, and brief, but not too brief. You know, not like fics that have Artemis and a member of the opposite gender curled up in bed in about a 100 words. Really cute, the ending was great - I like stories with endings different than you think they will be.

I think it was well-written and I like how you leave the ending to speculation. Nice little short fan fic :) (Yes, I'm still alive.)

If you write one more romance, I swear I will puke. YOU ARE OBSESSED! THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS ARTEMIS FOWL! OR JULIET, BUTLER, MR. FOWL, MRS. FOWL, OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY! STOP MAKING STUPID

ROMANCES THAT NOONE LIKES! IT'S MAKING ME SICK!

awwwwww... I was going to make some derogratry comment about songfics in general (I can't stand them because I always end up skimming over the lyrics so they don't have any meaning and they just break the flow of the narative. But that's my opinion.) but then I got the ned and I found one of those beautifully ambigious conclusions. I'm going to have to bask in the confuzulating goodness for some time yet. It' sone of those great spots where something is aluded to but nothing is answered, and I know that the author doesn't know the meaning either which just about says that there isn't one. Sorry, but I've been known to do that myself for time to time.

Generally very cute but I think the fault in your 'romancy' stories is you have the feelings so cut and open. It makes it a bit unrealistic because they know they love each other in their minds but sometimes love is the wrong word or too advanced for the situation. I can imagine Ditzy!Juliet saying she loves Artemis, but Kitty's!Juliet is much more subtle and coy and so the statement does not nessicerily fit her. If you had made her more ditzy then everything in this story would have been brilliant but I just have to disagree with that.

Ok i belive im am probably being dense but what exactly does juliet see in Artemis's eyes?

oh god...oh my god...NO! it was such a good story...till the end...GOD NO! artemis and holly? I'm gonna be sick...nice story though...except for the ending...

I'm not one to go "Awww..." after a fic, but your fic just made me do that. :) I like the little twist in the plot as usual, you never fail to surprise your reader. Excellent vocabulary, fluent writing and a sound plot. Sorry to be corny, but I'm glad you kept it short and sweet. I could feel the tension Juliet felt when Artemis was so close to telling Holly his feelings. (Which ironically, weren't for Holly at all, but Juliet.) I think I'm starting to develop a liking for Juliet/Artemis fics. :) Keep up the good job!