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| DearDelerious 2006-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis was very good and extremely sweet but homosexuality was actually widely accepted during the edo period of japan. Besides that i really loved it. your writing style is beautiful. keep it up! :D |
| Generally Maz 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is a most wonderful story! I love how it's set in a different time with more emphasis on honour and family's honour. |
| Kiriska 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI'd be interested. It's a very nice concept that few have thought to develop. Very intriguing at the least. |
| Glory 2003-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo be honest-I hate yaoi, I hate Taito, but I saw your description (which was very interesting, I like your style), and I had to correct it- in Ancient Japan, it was not dishonorable to be gay. Infact, tons of men were gay. Samurais even married each other so that way they would care for each other more. Sorry if this was seemed to be a flame, it is not. I admire the idea and I think most of your ideas that I have read are excellent ideas, but it was just that that I had to correct, you have my apologies. ~Glory |
| anonymne 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. Lovely. I know it's not uncommon, but it -is- a nice thing to read a sadly-toned story that is written so well. The setting is gorgeous, and the emotion in the story is such that I feel really sad for the characters. Excellent jobl. ^o^ |
| Shokiri Kitten 2003-04-25 ch 1, | abuseOh wow..I loved this so much ^^ I'm actually crying! Please do a sequel I love this story so much! |
| Yaoi Banshee of Death 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. I REALLY liked this fic. It was very well written, and personally, I think you did a fine job in capturing the essence of the culture. And I'm a Japanese major. I would love to see a sequel, as well, so I hope you decide to do one. Please keep up the wonderful work. ^-^ |
| Satan's Little Helper 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abuseBUSHIDO!!! I had the lovely joy of learning all this in world civ. Wonderful story, a little on the odd side, but who am i to judge? Heh. I really like your style, it kinda reminds me of Tolkien. A sequel would be much appreciated! |
| Kimi-chan (I decided to go ... 2002-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniff* that was so sweet (finaly, a review that doesn't start with 'eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee') |
| meijing 2002-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this story. The words flow, like poetry. You should do a sequel; it would be interesting to find out what happens to Taichi and Yamato. I like the ending especially...about how the snow would never judge them. ^_^ |
| JammyB 2002-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Good. The story is beautifully written, like poetry. Maybe you could go further into the story. And more chapters. And slightly longer. Still, one of the best stories i have read this year! |
| Nolwe the Lady Dragon 2002-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked that story! A sequel would be a very good idea, you know. ^_^ I'm all for it! |
| Dreamcrafter 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like the setting. You should continue this! |
| FireDemon 2002-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, sequal'd be cool. That was nicely done, it was a little discordant. The story was excellent, I loved it, and I really did like the way you wrote it. If you could make it flow a little better it'd be perfect. The whole cultural thing might take research but I'm willing to bet it'd be worth it. Anyway, nice job, I liked it. |
| babydragon 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abusei like the way you described everything, it's all very pretty... and they eloped! ::sighs:: how romantic... i would really look forward to the sequel, if you were to write it. gambatte^^ |