Hey great story so far, but can you please update soon, you just left a GIANT cliffhanger.

-Necromancer

I've said it once, I'll say it again. UPDATE! DON'T ABANDON FICCIES! GR!

this is a funny story!I was laughing so hard while reading this.Pls continue!:)

Oh.. interesting. ^^ I can't wait to read more!

~Paddy~

why have'nt you updated! i must find out more!

ZOMGPWNOMGTTYLTTFNLOLOHMYGODIMONFIRESOMEBODYOUTMEOUTFORCRYINGOUTLOUD!11one

PU-LEASE! UPDATE!1one

*rubs hands together* o and the plot thickens

;_; THAT WAS SO GOOD

update plz
;_; !1

I love this, it was exactly what I was looking for. I love your characteriztion especially that of Otogi. I hope you update soon.

i know that you havent updated this story in a while and i'm not even sure if you're still writing fan fiction, but if you are please update this story, i would really like to know what happens. Plz update soon.

Very cool story please wirte more chapters. PLEASE!

please continue

Oh my god!
You totally rock with this story.
I can't wait to read the rest of what you come up with.
XD Seto and Jou look really cute together and I had to really laugh when Jou ended straddling Seto.
Oh by the way, you mentioned Honda getting upset with Otogi for swatting his hand away...
...Are you going to make them get together?
'Cause they look sorta cute togetha, although I'm a 1# fan of Seto/Jou

Ooh.. that was good. Otogi really needs to learn his place.. but the skirt idea was fabulous! keep it goin. and you just might reach my fav. list!

Ok great fic!Oh and it seemed that the little chat Joey had with Seto was a plan to get Joey worked up enough to forget his honor [which was slowly going anyway while he was in that dog suit] and call off Duke's bet so he can go back to his normal life [and on the uncut show he gets beaten by his dad did you know that? and maybe you should add that but its just a sugestion] ok ok get it got it good
Matta Ne
Taylor