 Elsie Grandewing 2006-04-11 . chapter 6You would do that for fanfics? That is so cool! |
 jhvh777 2005-12-17 . chapter 6I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! |
 Genisay 2005-06-19 . chapter 6Really good so far. I love the whole role reversle. OMG! Wily knows!*gasp* Rock's in for it now. I can't wait to see more.
LOL, I'd really appriciate it if you would read my story and tell me what you think. It's called MegaMan X Episode 10: Technical Difficulties.
I really need some more reviewers. |
 Heiros 2005-02-03 . chapter 6I wont kill you! I'm just glad you finally updated! YAY! I so happy! |
 2004-09-21 . chapter 6 what can i say? that was amazing. you guys did a wonderful job with rock and forte's characterization and in a very unique way. i do hope you write more |
 Bobcat Moran 2004-09-03 . chapter 1Eek! An update! *insert excited squealy noises here* Yes, I *am* slow at noticing these things. Being more-or-less away from ff.net for the summer'll do that to you.
Erm, yes, anyway... Homocidal!Forte and Bipolar!Rock are fun, I'm thrilled to pieces to see that this story isn't dead, and I'll keep my fingers crossed that y'all can keep this going. |
 sakura117us 2004-09-03 . chapter 6 Good story!! please continue sometime.. ^_^ |
 Za 2004-08-30 . chapter 6 DAMN! So much bloody suspense! You know, now that I'm looking out for this fic, yer gonna have to finish it, right? Causecausecause... I really wanna see how it turns out. ^^ |
 Popcorn_oracle 2004-07-31 . chapter 6 And I randomly decide... "hey I'll check up on my poorly neglected RockForte pairing obsession that I've neglected because of YuuJou" And I find this story updated. ...::SHOCK:: So short of a chapter ; ;. Well, 'tis interesting still methinks. Someday if I ever stop getting pissed off with FF.net's story quality... and come back here to randomly check up on rockman, I hope I can see a bit more. |
 RandyPandy 2004-07-27 . chapter 6Ouch... poor Rock, Wily knows and wants him to do something... I hope he's okay. I also feel kinda sorry for Forte as well. Are you hinting that Blues will die? Please don't kill him! He's my favorite character! And don't worry, Bibly; I'm not going to hurt you. But don't take as long to update next time, 'kay? I'm talking to both of you. ^_^ |
 Arken elf 2004-07-27 . chapter 6 Great, you continue, I think you never continue.
Your fanfic it´s great. |
 Ketsi-aiita-n 2004-07-27 . chapter 6*screams* oh my god! next chapter! I'm getting scared for rock, which is NOT ALOOWED, and feel sorry for blues which is also NOT A GOOD THING. loving forte's programming. loving forte. and gosple. quick! next chapter! |
 Bibly 2004-06-14 . chapter 5After a million kazillion bazillion years...I have finished writting the next chapter to this story. ._. ::is shot by millions of people:: Only problem is...I don't know your e-mail address, Marisa. ::shot again:: MSN is being dumb and won't show it to me. o_o;; What is it, so that I may (FINALLY) send you the next part to this thing?
::is shot by hundreds of thousands of millions of people:: |
 Janette_Morgan 2004-05-28 . chapter 5 I really like your story -- the whole Rock/Forte body-switching thing was a great idea, and your typing skills are excellent. However, the rating (PG) is extremely misleading. With that much swearing, it should be a PG-13 or R. Some minors might see it, think "Wow, only PG!" and read it come to have their little eyeballs burnt out by all sorts of foul language. (Of course, you could always renovate it and remove the language, but if you don't want to do that, then you should change the rating.)
Other than that, it's a really great story. (Then again, I like putting people into different bodies myself, so... don't take me too seriously in that regard.) |
 Espirit-sama 2004-05-06 . chapter 1Very, VERY interesting! The intro sucks, but once you get past the bad grammar and Random capitalization in the First Sentence, you get into your groove and start writing well. Here's your clip:
"Forte Sat up in bed. It wasn't his bed. This wasn't his room. This wasn't right. He was staring at sky colored walls. The bed had sapphire sheets. He was wearing blue pajamas."
And here's the new and improved intro:
"Forte groaned and sat up in bed, rubbing an eye and yawning. The sapphire sheets slithered to the ground, landing on the blue carpet...
WHAT THE HELL?!
He jumped out of bed, and the floor was a lot closer than it was last night. He also saw he was wearing blue pajamas, and the normally grey walls had turned sky blue.
"What the *fuck*?!"
"
And there you go. I think it's better. Because there are no fragments. Fragments tend to break things up. If they're used properly they're great. If they're not they ruin the whole story. See?
Other than that, decent job. Characterzation is good. I'll read on to the next chapter. |