Very nice. Love how you used the Japanese words as well. don't see them very much in a lot of fanfictions. ^^ Good job.

this is a pretty good fic

Deanna/Angel

I really like it so far.
Please keep it up!
And could you please do some more little Ravan chapters?

Taxmike

Thank you very much(in Swedish)!!

Hey, don't put yourself down, this is good!
I was ** when Pan didn't become a Super Saiyan in DBGT. But this fic leaves a lot to thr imagination about what happened after GT.
Nice job! ^_^

It didn't really have a lot of japanese in it...

Hey Red Baroness, buddy that was an awsome story keep up the good work!!!

Wow great fic. :) Pan Power!