Excerpt #1:
Chapter Three: A new life
Akane stared out the window as the rain splattered against the windowpane. She let out a sigh and brushed her hair, which came down to just her shoulders, out of her eyes. She fingered her hair. She had always had it cut shorter then most of her friends. It had just been a preference ever since she was born.

Excerpt #2:
Chapter Seven: The Fight
The wind blew lightly . . . Akane just sat down on the edge, slightly away from everyone else. Her long hair blew in the wind. She brushed it out of her eyes as she thought to herself.

Other than that, and the fact that you haven't updated in three years, good story.

This one´s incredible good!

Keep writing!

please give us more!

please give us more!

please give us more!

Complete unmitigated brashness on your part. You implied that the Jusenkyo curse was not the one referred to so give a few hints, please! and another chapter or ten.

Complete unmitigated brashness on your part. You implied that the Jusenkyo curse was not the one referred to so give a few hints, please! and another chapter or ten.

This is a really good story! I need to watch more Ranma to better understand the characters! So...is Ranma still 16 when he time travelled or whatever? I'm a little confused on his age. If you could clarify that would be great!

Keep up the good work!

WHAT DO YOU MEAN, "SHORT"?!?!?! That was long...
AWESOME! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!
*gets smacked by her Yami*
Yami Alcy: DAMMIT, I SAID NO CAFFIENE TODAY!
Alcy: *is stroking a bottle of Mountain Dew like gollum* my precious...
Yami A. -_-;

~The Lady Alcnolien~
and
~Her Yami~

Minor problem in this chapter.. you've established the directional curse at its fanon worst.. yet you have Ryouga being told to go sit somewhere and instead of getting lost or at least finding said seat slowly you to the contrary have him finding it 'quickly'. Can't really have it both ways.. either his directional problems are normal and just can't follow maps well or he can't follow the simplest directions well.

Not to steal a title, but "The more things change, the more things stay the same."

i like this fic and waht is eith the hidden power ranma has pls explan in one of the new chapters i hope you will wright

Absolutely wonderful story!

Wai! Great chapter! I'm waiting to see how Ryoga and Ranma fight it out...