Huh

I can honestly say the worst thing about this is that it's short. That's not horrid and I really did enjoy it.

"The Bible is copyrighted to God Almighty. May He have mercy on my soul if He should sue me."

I love that line ^ ^ Have a nice day.

The best part of this is your disclaimer: "The Bible is copyrighted to God Almighty.  May He have mercy on my soul if He should sue me." Haha - I laughed so hard when I read that. (Yeah, in accordance to the others - "Smirk" doens't really work.) Nice job!

Is very cute. "Smirk" is okay, perhaps a slightly better word without the arrogance connotation, but that's fine. Mkay?

I don't see Jesus/Yeshua capable of smirking, but other than that it's well written and a nice modern adaptation. I doubt that God would sue you though. :)

thats really great...good modern version. I give it A+