O.O Okay...Kinda freaky with Maya and Dennis there...Oh well.Thats the best part o dis fic!

Do I really need to say anything?(I luv it!)
=)

Omg!Kevin!?Thats just so creepy! O.O

Oh...Dennis is in lu-uv!^-^' I had to say it...

~^-^~ hehehe...Maya and Finch,sittin' in a tree...

^-^ I'm so happy and filled with joy from this fic...

Gah...I luv it!But its pretty surprising for Dennis to quit...

Neo aka Insanity:Wow,this is a very sad chapter...
InuYasha:Its not that sad...
Neo aka Insanity:Yes it is!>=( Thats like saying that I'm not a girl!
InuYasha:Its hardly the same.We all know u r a girl, but the fic's not sad.
Neo aka Insanity:Yes it is!Wah...And Luvs it!
InuYasha:O.O'

Wow.O.O' For a second there, Finch was actin' kinda weird...I luv it!~^-^~ Tacos!

Yay!I usually only read anime fics, but this is way better!
InuYasha:Gasp!Better than fics about me?!!
Neo aka Insanity:Yes.Yes it is.(Looks at InuYasha) But not better than your show!^O^
Inu:Really?
Neo aka Insanity:Ehhehheh...(transalation-No, not really)

^_^' I am very shocked! This is so funny! And how come more ppl don't write JSM fics?This is so cool O.O...!

more please!

great chapter, just read the whole thing, can't wait for more.

Very good *clap* I loved Elliot's little 'Maya and Dennis, sitting in a tree.' I could totally see him doing that. I also like how Jack was accepting of the relationship even if he didn't particularly like it. Hope you post another chapter soon.

Your story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. Please post the next chapter soon. This is my favorite JSM story.